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Merotik


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After discovering a human baby boy, Princess Celestia takes the child under her wing and raises him as her own. Yet, she knows humans don't belong in their world and one day she'll have to decide whether to keep him, or send him back to where he belongs.

Canon to the Era of Harmony.

Written by Merotik
Edited by Masblackops

(3/14/18) ATTENTION: I will be creating a remake of this story. It will include most of the original characters from this story and may include new characters. However, the concept of the story will be rewritten entirely. Also, I am looking for anybody who wants to help with the remake of this story. Its just for fun and only if you want to. I'm looking for proof readers, editors, and artist. Anyone who helps will be credited and, if you would like this, links will be provided to your personal work. This is just for fun and there is no time limit, so there's no rush on anyone who wants to help.

This is a rewrite on an old story from an old account. The rewrite of: My Little Human and Only Human, will be published on this account: Deidorimu

Thank you for reading this story, and those that inspired me to rewrite it.

(6/16/19) The remake to My Little Human is currently being written. The prologue is finished and chapter one is nearly done. If you would like to read the prologue it is available right now. If you are having trouble reading it than send me a message and I will see what I can do so that you can read it. The first chapter will also be available soon as well. To read the sneak peak go ahead and click on the latest chapter of this story and than click the link provided from there. You will also need the password given to you in the chapter

I hope you enjoy the My Little Human Remake!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 41 )

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Would you like to edit my stories? I mean, if its not a problem, you probably have your own stuff to deal with so I wouldn't want to intrude. Plus, I have a really big story planned out after this stories finished, so I wouldn't want that to be a bother.

Wow, that's interesting, I like the story but. . . . . I really cant believe Celestia would really think that's a good idea, I guess what the people say is right, SOMETIMES, BY TRYING TO PREVENT SOMETHING ONLY MAKES YOU MAKING IT HAPPEN IN THE END.

Keep up the good work, I'm really intrigued of what's going to happen.

That was oddly depressing...

5734576 I will edit, but only on my free time.

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It is neither a sequel, nor a prequel, it is a! . . . Uh . . . actually, I don't know what it is. I'm not sure if there's a word for it, if there is then I have no idea what it is.

All of my chapters have been edited and re-uploaded thanks to an awesome friend of mine! She has no name for the time being, but we'll eventually change that.

Comment posted by Fading Soul deleted Mar 21st, 2015
Comment posted by Worm-revolver deleted Mar 23rd, 2015

please, let there be a sequel.

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There will be another story, but its technically not a sequel. I call it a "pre-sequel", because I have no idea what it is. It does involve the story though.

I think you meant to say foal and not foul

Make sure when someone else starts talking to start a new paragraph

Double check on capitalization too

Let's see what else this story has to offer

Only question I have is why is there no human tag?

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Not enough humans, doesn't count if there's just one.

5932702 Really? I never heard that. There's plenty of (actually a hell of a lot of) stories here with only one that have the human tag.

But hey, do what you need to do. Still a damn good story.

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Human tags up.

He pressed the button on the empty sword handle, a flaming sword erupted from it.

Is this Sword like the one Hiccup uses in How to Train Your Dragon 2?
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Sort of. I came up with the idea of a flaming weapon before I saw the movie. Originally I was going to make it a flaming sword with the blade protruding out the top and bottom. Then I saw the movie, I loved the weapon that Hiccup used, and made the flaming weapon more similar to his. With some changes of course.

make a sequel I like this story

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Oh, you liked this story? Sorry, I didn't think anyone still read stories on my old account. I'm glad you liked it, I really am, but I'm afraid I don't write stories for this account anymore. I've started a new account about five months ago, writing a new story. So the sequel to this story was cancelled. If you want to read my new story on my new account that'd be much appreciated (if your into Doctor Whooves that is). However, any unfinished story I had on this account or any story that was intended to have a sequel has been cancelled. Thanks for enjoying the story and sorry for the inconvenience.

so disappointing, sh eis making the nightmare a reality with these actions. poor sun princess, blinded by her own radiance, she can't see more than her own muzzle.

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one often meets your fate, on the path you take to avoid it.

In the bushes was a foul, or at least, it seemed like it was a foal.

You spell it wrong in the same sentence you spell it correctly? Why jot just go through and edit for all the misuses of words (there are many). Continuing on.

Oish, please go back and correct the spelling.

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Its been three years, I don't think I'll be fixing anything with these stories anymore. Sorry.

I'm pretty sure that it has been explained in the comics that sunset and twilight where both celestia's students at the same time, but they learned seperately, never meating in the procces, completely unaware of the others existance, I don't know why celestia would have done this so don't ask me.
Also, a 'moon' would likely reffer to a lunar cycle which is about a month, therefore 30 moons is 2 and a half years, not 3 and a half.

Welp, gotta wait another 4 years for this

"There's no need to worry, your highness, my methods are flawless!" Myra said as she lit an essence. The essence exploded into a black cloud, when the cloud disappeared, they saw that Myra's face was covered in soot. Myra gave a weak chuckle, "oops, wrong essence". She quickly tossed the essence aside and began pulling out a new one (Celestia noticed as she tossed it that the wrapping on the essence said "Lou's Prank Shack"). Once a new essence was lit, she quickly wiped the soot off her face with a rag, tossed it aside, and went straight to work.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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Its parts like this that make me excited to incorporate more comedy in the rewrite :rainbowlaugh:

Why is it always that, if Celestia adopts a human baby, its ALWAYS well before Luna's return so that Twilight is of similar age? Why not after Tirek or the movie?

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Ah! Good question! You see its really quite simple! The reason I have set it before the movie is because . . . .

I haven't seen the movie yet . . . :fluttershysad:

9686069
Oh and as for Tirek, the original story was written before Tirek. As in, before that episode aired. So at the time it was because he hadn't been established into the canon yet. Now, I wanted to keep the human the same age because that's how the original was. There are many changes to the rewrite, but many things that keep it connected to the original. But also, when creating the rewrite the thought of the human being a different age than Twilight did occur at one point. I had actually considered the human being the same age as the CMC. But, I wanted there to be drama. And I wanted the human to have a story arc where he leaves for many years. And than he returns as an adult and he is nearly unrecognizable to those who had known him as a child. I could have done that either way by making him the same age as the CMC, but than I would have to give the CMC and many other characters, who are actually canon, their own time skips too. And with my story, I like to keep it as close to canon as possible. I don't like making a story where the world revolves around the one character. Sure the human will have an impact on the characters but him coexisting with the main characters will not alter the canon timeline in anyway. In my story, he's just another character. He's the main character of his own story but the background character to the Mane Six.

Did I get off track? Sorry, I just get really excited when explaining the thought process behind my story.

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The fun part about fics is chaning the canon, though.

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In some way. Its just my personal preference not to touch the canon too much. I like moving along with the canon, not really changing it too much.

All Prophecies are self for filling the best way to get something to happen is they make everyone worry about it so much that they’ll try to prevent it by all means and doing so and in doing so cause the vary thing they dread to happen we seen a great example right here

I was really enjoying this story but you lost me when Celestia told Lyra to tell the staff to ignore Glee.

Lyra didn't know how to respond to this, Celestia's logic seemed pretty legit, but it just didn't seem like the right thing to do.

Ah, isolation! Works very well on creatures made for social interaction and will suffer psychologically without it.

"I failed Lyra, I failed Glee!" Celestia cried.

You tried to f##k him over, no wonder he f##ked you over. Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth. Because what comes around goes around.

She realized too late just how much she hurt Glee. Guess she didn't learn after banishing Luna.

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