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Merotik


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Celestia found me when I was just a baby. Alone, lost in the forest, who knows what would have happened if she hadn't found me. Not only that, but she's treated me with such kindness and love, she's like a mother to me, I hope this life never ends... Yet, even the good times must go, and mine, was going to end for the worst....

This takes place during My Little Human, from Glee Sunrises point of view.

Reading My Little Human first is highly recommended, most of this story will be very confusing if you do not read My Little Human.
Written by Merotik
Edited by Anonymous Blank

(3/14/18) ATTENTION: I will be creating a remake of this story. It will include most of the original characters from this story and may include new characters. However, the concept of the story will be rewritten entirely. Also, I am looking for anybody who wants to help with the remake of this story. Its just for fun and only if you want to. I'm looking for proof readers, editors, and artist. Anyone who helps will be credited and, if you would like this, links will be provided to your personal work. This is just for fun and there is no time limit, so there's no rush on anyone who wants to help.

This is a rewrite on an old story from an old account. The rewrite of: My Little Human and Only Human, will be published on this account: Deidorimu

Thank you for reading this story, and those that inspired me to rewrite it.


(6/16/19) The remake to My Little Human is currently being written. The prologue is finished and chapter one is nearly done. If you would like to read the prologue it is available right now. If you are having trouble reading it than send me a message and I will see what I can do so that you can read it. The first chapter will also be available soon as well. To read the sneak peak go ahead and click on the latest chapter of this story and than click the link provided from there. You will also need the password given to you in the chapter

I hope you enjoy the My Little Human Remake!

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 37 )

Hmm. People don't seem to like this chapter very much. Is it to happy to be placed with a sad and dark tag? Or maybe I just need to post up the next chapter sooner? I don't know, can you guys send me feedback, that way I can try to make the story better.

5791931 Let me give you a hint: you're story is in the No Originality Brigade.

You couldn't fathom how many times this plotline's been done.

Comment posted by Merotik deleted May 17th, 2015

Metorik, you story is good, originality, I dont know how "no original" this is, I mean, I'm not really a good reviewer, but I can tell you this, I like your story, many like your story, and we really hope to see how this goes, please dont cancell it.

HOPING TO SEE HOW THIS GOES.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

5801779
Thanks! That means a lot! When I saw my story in the no originality brigade, and the badfic bin, I thought it was funny and took it as a joke. Then I saw how many dislikes I had and realized "oh . . . well then . . . ouch". I'm not gonna cancel my story, I'm actually posting a new chapter every Friday at 7:30. Thanks for enjoying my story! :twilightsmile:

5803241 no prob, my first story Keep Living for friendship started with 13 dislikes to 3 likes, it was hard for me but I kept going, my main problems were 1) "originality" (I never knew why) and the fact I didnt have an editor (for the sequel I have one now), it took months but in the end, I have more likes than dislikes and now, the readers are enjoying the sequel, obviously there will always be tough critics, just, take them with a laugh and keep going, (I know its easier saying it than doing it but everyone can do it).

it is a good story :twilightsmile:

5813073
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! Next chapter is this Friday at 7:30.

this is a amazing story never give up and keep on trucking

Excellent chapter, a little shor indeed, but I'm a little confused, I thought Celestia ordered their ponies to start ignoring glee at the age of 8 years, just saying.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

5820645
No, it was ten, so next chapter.

great chapter, keep up the good work.

5854651
Hey, if my next chapter is over 20,000 words long, what do you think I should do. Should I post the chapter in different parts, or upload the entire chapter?

dude, this was a really good chapter, Celestia is really dumb, talking about digging your own grave, well, I really love this story, but I really cant wait for the sequel of the first story, with glee being a badass and all.

5881733
Thanks, I'm glad you like it, but I have a question. You see, my next chapter is about 20,000 words long, so I was wondering. Should I split the chapters into different parts or just post the entire thing at once?

5882811 well, if you ask me, I'd rather the whole chapter, but you are right, maybe 20,000 is too much, make it in two parts.

You need to use either the 'Human' tag or the Alternate Universe tag.

5932711
But I thought you had to have more then just one human for it to be classified with a "human" tag?

5932713
Nope. The minute a human chacter is introduced you need to put up the Human tag. People will downvote your story if you don't.

5932722
Oh is that why I have over twenty dislikes? Or is it because my stories been placed in three different negative groups?

5985093
Yup! To this day, still one of my favorite episodes.

Excellent chapter, very good.

is there gonna be a sequal after this one?

6060493
Eventually, right now I'm working on Twilights Journey, a story non-canon to the era of harmony, and The Sirens and the Vampire, which is canon to the era of harmony. After those two stories are finished, then I will either start working on the sequel, or toy around with the other stories that I've wanted to work on. So to get to the point, yes, there will most definitely be a sequel. Oh, and if you like Glee Sunrise/Dawn Breaker, I have a little surprise in The Sirens and the Vampire.

6060493
Oh and P.S, my stories are going to take a long time before I can update, believe it or not, I'm trying to be a D.j. So I'm practicing a LOT while at the same time looking for a job, getting my license, and so on and so forth. So there's not gonna be a sequel until . . . I don't know . . . next year . . . ish.

Really though dovahkin??

I thought he was going to go suicide I know I would at that point :rainbowderp:

this story is not bad, only the celestia's decisions, Enjoyment this story and the other
i have the question about the gleen's future if celestia can with the consequences

5881733
I got to agree, Celestia is really dumb and a HORRIBLE parent right now. I mean let’s face the fact that she can’t keep him in the castle forever. Don’t you agree.

Wooooooooooow I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT CELESTIA GIVES ZERO FUCKS ABOUT HIS SON.

The bell tower was tall enough for ponies all over this area to see. Therefore, they can see our painting too. The painting was of Mom, or too be more specific, Mom's flank. It had her cutie mark exposed, and underneath it in big bold words said; "All hail Princess Sunbutt!"

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I'd love to help but i don't know how i could. I'd like to see this remake when ready. I'm curious will it be two seperate stories in tandum or one story with switching P.O.V's at various parts of the story all leading up to the big clash between Glee Sunrise/Dawn Breaker and Princess Celestia. Also What the F**k Celestia you stupidly made the prophecy you were trying to prevent come ya F**king stupid Alicorn. You single-hoofedly signed your own death warrent. This is why i like you sister better. Ahem sorry about that this was a great story. Only great stories make me react that way. I applaud you and i look forward to your remake.

9683492
Because people liked the original but the original never had the sequel it was supposed to have. Also because the original was written when I was just learning how to write, so its really not that good in my opinion. I feel I can rewrite the story and make it better.

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