Pinkie's Sweet Tooth

by Atreyu

Epilogue

The spring afternoon sun cast its glorious amber light over Ponyville. Shining light through the canopy of trees, illuminating their humble beauty in a sparkling array of golden and emerald lights, shifting and swaying gently in the breeze. The contrasting lights and shadows upon the thick line of trees and flowers, adding to the brilliant reality and depth of the scene.
The gentle buzz of activity, of friends and neighbours-- a community, interacting in the town square below, harmonised with the song of the various birds around him.

Marcus Kane inhaled deeply, absorbing the peace and vitality of the life around him. The warm kiss of the golden afternoon sun upon his face and the gentle caress of the breeze around him completed the transcendence.
He opened his eyes again and saw his six friends coming to meet him on top of the hill.

He waved a hoof to them. They all smiled and waved back.

The pure beauty of what he was now a part of was washed over him and sent a ripple of hope and joy all across his body. And, for the first time in his life, he felt true peace.

Comments

[The_Lone_Wanderer]

VERY well done for a first time writer; the plot was interesting and fairly well written, the characters developed decently, and the ending was quite good. If I could give it more likes, I would, and I think you have earned yourself a follower.

[Dustchu]

Oh wow, that ending was pretty... tame, I loved it!

This was a very good story, nicely written and well done. Marcus Kane, back to his old self.
I like it, nicely done man! and from below, first time writing? Well done! //claps very well done.

Keep it up man!

[Atreyu]

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5593611 Thank-you, wholeheartedly! Your continued support has made all the difference. Thank you both so much =)

[Dustchu]

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You're very welcome man! This story was epic! I thought it died like most I've seen ;w;
but luckily it didn't! :D and I'm glad to have stuck with it till the end!

Keep up the awesome work man!

[Nerdboi Clique 1076]

*flips a table and knocks a TV over* DAMMIT! *throws books out a window* I owe him 20 bucks now!

[Zman537]

I have but one thing to say.

[Atreyu]

5628660 I'll take that as a compliment

[Radioactive Dragon]

you know what you need to do? make a one shot story of sweet tooth killing everyone in ponyvile

[Atreyu]

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What order should he do it?