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Atreyu


Jesus said to them: "Healthy people don't need a doctor; sick people do. I have come not for those who think they are righteous, but for those who know they are sinners and need to repent." ~Luke 5:32

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Lyra finds herself in a race against the clock amongst the busy streets of Manehatten!
Will she ever reach her destination and get back home in time?


Image: Lyra in Pants by egophiliac - DeviantArt.com http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/224/6/9/lyra_in_pants_by_egophiliac-d46alho.png

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“I’ve bought pants a hundred times before! I have a rough idea of what size I am! It’s these fan-dangled fashion stores with their ludicrous size charts!”

Blame it on the continent of Stirrup.

“Shouldn’t you take the pants off first!?” Bon-Bon called out down the hallway.

If she did that, how would they know who wears the pants around here?

I love how you use the American definition of "pants" but the British definition of everything else. You should take out the last line,

...Ruining the very pants she was about to return...

because it's easy enough to figure out.

Good, but with a few errors pointed out by the other commenter.
Not bad for a first try!

Loved it! HANDS down wonderful!

Ponies in seinfeld, Shwing

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