Lyra finds herself in a race against the clock amongst the busy streets of Manehatten!
Will she ever reach her destination and get back home in time?
Image: Lyra in Pants by egophiliac - DeviantArt.com http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/224/6/9/lyra_in_pants_by_egophiliac-d46alho.png
Blame it on the continent of Stirrup.
If she did that, how would they know who wears the pants around here?
I love how you use the American definition of "pants" but the British definition of everything else. You should take out the last line,
because it's easy enough to figure out.
Good, but with a few errors pointed out by the other commenter.
Not bad for a first try!
Loved it! HANDS down wonderful!
Ponies in seinfeld, Shwing