Spear and Shield, two stallions who serve Princess Celestia as part of her Royal Guard, are out and about in Canterlot on yet another boring day. Tasked to keep watch over things near the entrance to the capital city of Equestria, they try to numb the boredom that is quickly setting into their routine.
Fortunately, a stallion who wishes to enter the city just so happens to have a rather interesting characteristic about him that might just liven up things for a few minutes.
Flash Sentry character tag used because there aren't any Royal Guard tags here.
Chapters (2)
FIRST!!!!
5473694 Yet I liked the story first, so... (sticks tongue out)
5473718 ah but you didn't comment first!!! and that's all that matters
5473723 FACK! FOILED AGAIN! NEXT TIME GADGET!
(wraps himself in his cloak and evilly and sinister;y makes his way offstage)
I am not kidding, I am playing Skyrim right now, a guard said that line shortly before I read this line, and suddenly a dragon appeared overhead a couple seconds after he said it.
5473823 You talking about yourself or the story? Cause' I think both are sweet and nice. I'd say I want to track both but it might come off as perverse. XD
5473831 I beat the game, and once I used the Dragon Shout to call in a dragon to help me fight some mountain trolls.
Glitch happened. The fucker phased through the mountain and threw me off to my death. Oh I hated myself for not having a camera to record that comedy...
A was fairly certain a dick named Xarsor was gonna appear.
Nice idea for a story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck.
I haven't actually read it yet, but is it going to mirror the episode of civil protection super closely?
Also, will there be accusations of vampirism.
5483076 (shrugs shoulders) I dunno...
FIRST and foremost, how the [censored] does Spear know about that changeling stuff unless he actually is a changeling
Second, Spear was all like, "Nah man, we can't turn him in for that. Let's go buy hats and bracelets and stuff" and Shield was all like "But then we'll come up with something to turn him in with" and Spear was all like "SURE". What?
5580485 First - Yeah. Like he said, he can know stuff too. You ever question Pinkie's all-knowing powers in other fanfics?
Second - I'm not a great writer, remember? I want people to understand this. I'm not a professional writer and to be honest, writing stories is very, very hard for me to do because most of the popular works are all clopfics, and because I find little inspiration to guide me, to give me the incentive to write more. Maybe if I had someone who was willing to work with a retard like myself on a story, I'd write a bit more quality stuff, but nobody has the time or really bothers. So all I can do is try my best to give what I can. I'm only really here now to try and make friends. Assuming you and I are still on good terms, right?
5581079 Yeah, I mostly tried to find some bullshit to be able to say first without seeming like a douche.
5582323 That's alright mate.
So far the story you wrote is good I don't really take of notice of grammar errors when I read someone story, I just read on not saying there is in you're writing so I be looking forward to next chapter in this story
5979420 If I ever decide to carry it on. Honestly I'm beginning to think I'm losing interest in writing, because at the end of the day it is hard to get anything noticed when there's a god damn clopfic popping up and getting attention.
Seriously, screw those cheap wastes of space.
I like this!