Theres a time when everypony goes through something harsh within their life, something that could possibly change them for the worst, or for the better. Something that could even change their lives. Rainbow Dash is put in the hospital for recovery after a tree is struck down on the Apple Family's home. She's determined to do whatever it takes to get back on her hooves, to push forward into getting herself up and back into the skies. Despite her urge to get better, somepony is stopping her from doing that. Her once best friend as a filly, Applejack. After all the years of being rivals, the two are slowly becoming closer again during Raibow's recovery, as they were before when they were younger, eventually realizing that friendship isn't always enough.
... No offense, but... If you can't even spell the title of the fic properly, then I'm not sure what would make me want to read the actual story... It's like you didn't care or something. I'll give it a go later, if you take the time to cahnge the title to 'Audacity', like it's supposed to be. (I assume, since 'Audicity' isn't a word.)
Forgive me for misspelling the title wrong. I was in a rush and didn't notice, thanks for pointing that out. However if you do decide to read it, I hope ya like it, regardless if the title was misspelled.
I like the story so far. I've noticed a couple spelling errors but nothing too bad. I gotta say, the whole Dashie getting hurt and falling in love theme is way overdone, but I do enjoy this so far.
Looking forward to new chapters
Forgive me, for not having as intelligible comment, as much as I'd like it to be, frankly because the words I am looking for, I haven't used since I was in school. So I'll keep it simple, so I don't look like an idiot.
But let me say, right off the bat, I had to stop reading, without even getting halfway through the first page, to say that this story has got me hooked.
The imagery you described during the storm seems very accurate, to say the least. I can see the wind howling, and the fur bristling in my minds eye, by the words you have used.
The words I'm reading are painting a very vivid picture. I do so look forward to your next instalment of this story!
Sincerely,
Your first watcher.
Me.
Good story so far, I don't see why everyone is commenting about spelling, it happens to the best of us.
More? I quite like the story so far. I've become a bit of a shipping addict lately. Mainly Fluttershy and Big Mac. But I like this one, and I'd like to see more.
Hmm, seems okay. I'll track it and see where it goes. That being said, dear Celestia has this story been done to death. Is there any sort of injury that Rainbow hasn't been forced to endure to put her in a hospital bed so that Applejack can care for her? And there were many spelling errors in this story which became very distracting--such as using "witch" instead of "which."
Okay I really want to read this story. It looks very good. But......
Like always I am procrastinating writing my story. So once I've typed out my next chapter or at least a decent chuck of a chapter I'll read this.
This story is now liked, favourited, and I will be watching you.
This storyline has been done many many times and this story specifically has quite a few incorrect spellings and sentences that don't actually make sense.
That said, I'l still track it anyway, and see where it goes.
im gonna cry...
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEEDS MOAR!
WHY? But WHY? WHY Rainbow Dash ALWAYS gets hurt? WHY? WHAT DID SHE DO to DESERVE THAT!?
so whens the next chapter gonna be?
538605 I'm kinda struggling with it but it'll be posted soon!
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k, thnks pal.
You have a few recurring mistakes such as "paste" instead of "pace" and viscously instead of viciously, but the actually storytelling and overall descriptions are fantastic, I would have someone proofread this for you because it's 97% complete, just a few little things that bring it down!
good stuff man. cant wait for more
... Will this ever be updated?