• Published 30th Apr 2012
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Friendship is Sadness - Crystal sky

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Extra: Celestia's Unread Reply

To My Faithful Student,

I have known-well, expected- that you had been depressed about it all. I also knew somepony had taken the Immortality Spell, But I had no idea that it was you. Do not think I'm angry, my student. I understand what you mean when you say that you want to be with them. For eternal happiness. I can relate to you, my student. I have seen so many good ponies, who I had come to know and love, who pass away. My heart is so void and empty from the ponies that I've seen go, and I wish I could join them, but that's impossible for I am immortal, as you know. I will 'die' eventually, that is true, but I will be reborn again, like a phoinex. That's why Filamena is my pet, for she is the only thing that will stay alive forever with me.I know that you will pass before you get this letter, and I apologize. I just wish for you to know that you are, and will always be, my faithful student.

Forever yours,

Princess Celestia

Comments ( 24 )

Ehh.. it could have been so much better. I think if you take your time not rushing and really write down what you feel the story will always be better. I should know.

I saw this cover art on dev art. I don't know I keep seeing the cover art story then this one. :rainbowdetermined2:

520232 I fully agree, it's just that not much inspiration or thought goes into anything I do at the moment. One of my best friends is going literally insane and another one attemted suicide this weekend. Nothing is making me inspired anymore, not even my sadness. Sorry for my ramble :ajsleepy:

Somepony! Someponyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

other than that, could use a bit more emotion. A bit more teary eyed stuff.

520252

It's a very nice ramble though :derpyderp2:

520270 fixed it :rainbowwild: The somepony thing

520372....is that good or bad?:rainbowhuh:

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It was sad alright, but almost way too short to allow me to feel sad. It just hit me and then its gone... Do you see what I'm saying?:applejackunsure:

520438 I understand! :pinkiehappy: if you read my ramble earlier then you'd know why it was short. That, and my brother was yelling at me :facehoof:

Not original, but not bad.

520486
Anyway I hope your day turns around :pinkiehappy: sorry for your current situation:pinkiesad2:

god damn my sensitivity!!!! :ajbemused::fluttercry:

525533 Whoops:twilightblush: I'll fix it! and thank you!:twilightsmile:

525715

Sorry to keep being a grammar police officer, but the "there" to the left of the "there" I told you to correct needs to be a "their" also...

525877 OH GOD :ajbemused: CURSE MY PAYING ATTENTION SKILLS!!! and i don't care if you correct me :pinkiehappy:

I think this story was very touching. I think anyone who says they think it was rushed was probably reading just to pass time, and with the amount of words it is, of course it feels rushed, but I think it's perfect the way it is. If anyone wants to read something that isn't rushed, don't read an extremely short story if you want to pass time. :heart: :rainbowkiss:

892321 Thank you for that....I'm happy to say that my life has straightened out a little since this story was written. What you said made me even more happy! :twilightsmile:

:fluttercry: This is why I love this site. So many stories like this! I wuv to read dem.

For some reason Celestia's reply made me cry so much more

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