It has been 60 years since the Mane Six have done anything. All of the elements have long been dead, but Magic lives on. A small story of Twilight's last letter to Celestia. Since I've been feeling really depressed lately, this is the result of it Dx
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Ehh.. it could have been so much better. I think if you take your time not rushing and really write down what you feel the story will always be better. I should know.
I saw this cover art on dev art. I don't know I keep seeing the cover art story then this one.
520232 I fully agree, it's just that not much inspiration or thought goes into anything I do at the moment. One of my best friends is going literally insane and another one attemted suicide this weekend. Nothing is making me inspired anymore, not even my sadness. Sorry for my ramble
Somepony! Someponyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
other than that, could use a bit more emotion. A bit more teary eyed stuff.
520252
It's a very nice ramble though
520270 fixed it
The somepony thing
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520372....is that good or bad?
520407
It was sad alright, but almost way too short to allow me to feel sad. It just hit me and then its gone... Do you see what I'm saying?
520438 I understand!
if you read my ramble earlier then you'd know why it was short. That, and my brother was yelling at me 
520414 That was DEEP
Not original, but not bad.
520486
sorry for your current situation
Anyway I hope your day turns around
Too short >.>
520696thank you
dear god man...
god damn my sensitivity!!!!
I felt a small sadness in me... but I didn't cry... still a good story. (Must have cried out all my tears a bit ago...)
Btw...
"It is just a shame that there lives were fun but now there lives are gone."
"...lives were fun but now there lives are gone."
"...fun but now there lives are gone."
"...now there lives..."
"...there..."
525533 Whoops
I'll fix it! and thank you!
525715
Sorry to keep being a grammar police officer, but the "there" to the left of the "there" I told you to correct needs to be a "their" also...
525877 OH GOD
CURSE MY PAYING ATTENTION SKILLS!!! and i don't care if you correct me 
All these feels, bro. THIS IS WHY I COME TO THIS SITE.
I think this story was very touching. I think anyone who says they think it was rushed was probably reading just to pass time, and with the amount of words it is, of course it feels rushed, but I think it's perfect the way it is. If anyone wants to read something that isn't rushed, don't read an extremely short story if you want to pass time.
892321 Thank you for that....I'm happy to say that my life has straightened out a little since this story was written. What you said made me even more happy!
So Sad :(
THOSE FEELS!!! i`m already crying!!! the feels
For some reason Celestia's reply made me cry so much more
SOS!! I got the feels!!
this was so sad. I loved it