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The end of this chapter almost made me want to stop following this story. I hope what I think is about to happen, doesn't. If it does, I don't care how much I like this story. I'm out.
5954268 Don't worry there' no rape involved. Assuming that's what you were talking about. I know you were never fond of this whole idea but I urge you to stick around to the conclusion. It'll be better off once the end is reached than when it started.
The only time you'll find something like that in my story it'll be clearly said in either the story info of in the chapter title. I just have a bad habit of leaving in the middle of my cliffhangers until the next chapters in this story. Be for better or worse.
BTW, I'm taking a wild stab at the dark here, but I'm guessing you aren't a fan of the R word in fiction. Am I right?
5954910 This is correct. I read stories with mention but never the actual activity. Even then, those deal with the victim trying to come to grips and have some semblance of a functioning life.
5955219 Well, I sincerely apologize for that then. As I'm sure I mentioned before, I think it has been a while, but I made sure to let my readers know that if such activities were to ACTUALLY occur I would let them know ahead of time and I would have made a note of adding the sex tag with my blog as well.
I did with Wonderbolt my Heart and it served me well. As I'm sure you are aware i do tend to leave in the middle of intense moments in my stories trying to leave the readers wondering what's to come next. Clearly that's what I did but the circumstances in which I did it this time served to drive you away for the story. For that I am sorry.
But don't worry I will let you know if I do ever take that Direction. I read you post on your blog about what you hate and I can see how that could have been applied to my story as well. Even though it was based on OC characters from stories you don't read, like Nyx. I honestly had no idea who that was until I read up on her today.
I hope you'll stick around to find the intense conclusion to this day! in story of course.
Zalla661, I feel like you might have just jumped the shark on this on. This is a very dangerous point now and there is no turning back. You decided to through this curveball at us, so you better be ready to catch it.
But I am getting the impression that you know what you're doing so I'm going to trust you on this. I thoroughly enjoy this FimFic. Keep up the good work.
5960315I know that's why in the comment before reading I said that but don't worry. You guys know i love to leave things hanging to make it seem bad but It's not as bad as it sounds. Promise!
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Don't worry it gets better. I honestly wanted to gauge everyones reactions before proceeding so this was a way to make the story so that I can go either way if I wanted. It fits my style too. Though I honestly expected this kind of reaction. I once contemplated changing Twilight's position in the story a few times due to previous comments, but, I felt that would have been cheating.
Would you guys have minded if during the revisions I had changed the things Twilight did? I honestly wanted too but figured I'd be called out on it so I left it true to my original plan. No, it didn't involve Twilight rapeing AJ.
Okay, to be honest you provoke me with this chapter a little bit, but not absolute in a bad way.
Right now it more looks like rape, or that Twilight went a bit psycho here, i read the next chapter now, i only don´t like it that it looks like Applejack didn´t wanted it.
I probably judge this situation wrong because i decided to read the newest chapters first, befor i looked over the changed chapters, but for now i just read.
Don´t get me wrong, i just get a bit angry if i watch, hear, or read something like rape, but it is probably important for what happens later.
5954910 i am glad to hear that, but i don´t change my last comment, the end got me a little bit angry, the first thing i really hated about this story, but i am glad i did read the next chapter, and i am glad that i now read this comment from you.
This was a risky move from you i guess, but it seems to work, as long as she wasn´t really raped, i could still understand it if Applejack likes her.
5954910 i am glad to hear that, but i don´t change my last comment, the end got me a little bit angry, the first thing i really hated about this story, but i am glad i did read the next chapter, and i am glad that i now read this comment from you.
This was a risky move from you i guess, but it seems to work, as long as she wasn´t really raped, i could still understand it if Applejack likes her.
All I can think is... what the F*(@? Seriously, what did I just read at the end there? Did I miss the subtle clues of Twilight's decent into madness? Did I miss the point where they sold their soul to Nightmare Moon for power? I feel like I missed something big, but I don't know what.