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Good news: I love what you did with this chapter. That was one hell of a set-up. If anyone wants to know what kind of set-up...read the chapter.
Bad news: You, are sorely, in need, of at least one editor and/or one proofreader. They might not catch everything, but they could have caught most.
6187656 I know, but no one will take me up on the offer. Even in the proofreaders group. Do you know of anyone willing to edit or proofread?
Also glad you liked the setup. I know Derpy wasn't directly involved but, hey we all got a laugh from it. Right? Plus, now Ponyville is in good hooves with you know who.
It should have been Trixie!
Roseluck, and Bon Bon starts to look like they would have a bit power in Poniville, okay maybe not, i just mean that she is talking to everyone rather mean and bossy.
Hhhhmmmm not sure if i say it everytime, but this chapter was probably one of the best, it was very interessting, even if i only started to understand some of what happened in the end of the chapter, but i suppose it should be that way.
I donĀ“t want to say to much right now, but i enjoyed the little revenge, i somehow thought something had to happen next chapter, or in the near future. Nice to see that little Platinum is trying to fight for a higher position in her herd, that she would not get so easily. I also enjoyed Mauds weird beast friend.
6188613 LOL if Trixie was the mayor it'd had been a lot more funny. It would have been like the Alicorn Amulet all over again. Applesauce facial, banners with her face, and maybe this...
"Trixie what are you doing?"
"Trixie is running for mayor."
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6188638 Glad you liked the little revenge scheme I conjured up. I actually borrowed the idea, not the execution of it, from the crime show Elementary. It's a good show if you should ever get the chance to watch it I recommended it. Unless crime solvers isn't your thing.
Honestly I liked doing this chapter and Clash of the Gods part 1 and 2. Glad you guys liked them.
6189901 If i like the actors, i usually like crime stuff too, i have to give it a try, i can enjoy that stuff.