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I get the feeling that Applejack and Trixie might be stepsisters, it was their mothers that ran off together.
Although I'd think there would be some law against brawling in the streets and the Mayor could get them separated before Trixie got beaten into a pulp.
that would be awesome, but i would like it if they only start slowly to like each others, or at least make it a little bit difficult. I mean their friends should help them to be more friendly to each other.
5571125 Although I'd think there would be some law against brawling in the streets and the Mayor could get them separated before Trixie got beaten into a pulp.
I guess they would maybe don´t care at this point.
I got the feeling that Applejack was to fast calm again, but Twilight was maybe the reason why she could calm herself.
Good chapter, for me it seems Applejack was lucky to get a good strike at Trixe, no one of them looked really stronger. I am just glad that Trixie isn´t as weak as they make her look like sometimes.
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That's why she tried to stop them before but then Applejack attacked. Silly AJ.
PS. Thanks for commenting. Twilight Approves.
5571575 Oh, don't worry I got more planned for these two later. It'll be fun. Just you wait til Maud gets there then things will really get messy with AJ. I was going to hint at something later but you two already figured it out.
I have to say, this chapter was kinda repetitive. In the first paragraph, Mary and Rainbow Dash took Rarity home, placed her on the fainting couch and went back outside. A couple of cut-scenes later, Mary and Rainbow Dash were, once again, placing Rarity back on the couch, and this time getting raincoats. Also, didn't Trixie already tell Applejack her story about what happened to her mother and father in Day two, Part II, in the middle of the marketplace? Why is Applejack acting like she didn't hear this before?
Other than that, the fight was epic. How the hell was Trixie able to get up after the beating she took? I wonder if Trixie really did beat an Ursa Minor, thinking it was an Ursa Major, due to all the emotions she had built up? Also, Applejack better hope Maud don't see the shape that Trixie is in or that she doesn't hear about it. If she does, let's see how Applejack can fight against a 'fillyfooler' that can destroy rock with her bare hooves.
5573905 Trixie never told her the specifics. It wasn't going to be revealed until later what happened in great detail. Believe it or not this is how I responded to things that have been mentioned but not explained. I guess what I'm saying is that it's different to say I lost my parents vs. I lost my parents because (insert monologue here.) Make sense? So Applejack didn't know the specifics so she asked why?
Maud training. It made her, tough as rocks.
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Seriously though I hate making Trixie a bitch character, but she was only able to stand with Twilight help. But she was able to keep up with AJ due to Training. Let's face it, Maud training anypony is gonna be badass. Am I right or am I right?
5573905 PS. Sorry for repetition.
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