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Oh dear. It seems Trixie is a very wanted mare. Mary, Platinum, and now Maud. Is Trixie going to have to start a harem? BTW,
If Vinyl needs 6000 bits, how does that work?
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Presumably Vinyl has 2-3K bits herself which she can put towards building her music bunker.
5547606 Did I forget that part? I'll check cause I know I explained it.
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OK I fixed it. Vinyl was suppose to say she had over 2000 already. And Yes in this world that's still a lot of money. It's equivalent to trying to get a loan for a house in California.
A harem? Maybe, but just think of what'll happen when you get two jealous prone mares into the same room and Maud who apparently has the strength of one thousand Royal guards, makes you wonder.
I was actually having trouble with this chapter. IWas originally going to have Applejack get into a fight with Trixie over what she said to Apple Bloom. Do you think I made a good choice to not do that immediately?
PS Thanks for the comments people! It helps me stay motivated!
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Hey Trixie's just got to demonstrate that their is enough of her great and powerful self to go around and all those mare's will be as sweet as kittens (hissing and trying to claw each others eyes out).
I'm not sure about the fight, it might make more sense for Applejack to take action straight away while she's in a bad mood rather than having her act on it later when she's technically had a chance to cool down. This brings up a further plot strand.
It's interesting that Trixie seems to attract only the Earth Pony mares for some reason.
5548268 Speaking of which, no pony noticed the shape Trixie was in after her fight with Applejack?
Personally, I would like Applejack wanting to fight Trixie the next time she was at the farm, but can't because of a warning she received from her brother and/or Granny Smith.
5548321 It wouldn't surprise me, if Trixie is part Earth Pony.
i really like it, but i feel bad for some of those ponys, because to many Ponys are starting to being in love with someone and can´t be happy in the end. Either they start a herd with Maud and Derpy, or some of them are just getting disappointed, but maybe Maud can start dating Derpy.
I know it needs something bad to make the good things even better, but i can´t help myself, mostly all of my favourites ponys are getting to be disappointed.
However good chapter.
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5548321 Make sense about Applejack. But I felt the pacing would be broken if I had them fight right off the bat. Just remember the catalyst for Applejack is her sister.
5548779 NOOO WHAT HAVE I DONE!
I'm sorry your favorite ponies are all in this situation. I actually only like Trixie, Spitfire, and Mayor Mare honestly. Everypony else was OK.
5548837 well i know i change some of my favourites, but Trixie and Maud where always one of my Top.... 5 ponys.
Derpy was in my.....top-15/top10? i guess, but as much as i started to like your characters (OC or not), well you know.
PS: I like Spitfire and Mayour Mare/Mary too, but in your story i like them a little bit more, it really depens on how someone writes them. I guess you can take this as an compliment.
I probably said this already, but i guess for everything to be really good, there has to happen something bad first.
I currently read a Human/pony story, where a Human from our world is transported to Equestria, in this Equestria however, there are already Humans, but pet-Humans and they only can be around twenty-years old. The Humans are like cave dwellers, maybe they are intelligent, but i am not that far in the story till now.
However, what i want to say is, that there is always an atmosphere, like they have a hard time, the Human and Twilight. Even if something good happens, it always feels like they would have a hard time.
Applejack is rutting mindless Humans in her barn, because they have a breeding farm too. (that one disturped me a bit, because it was like "Zoophilie", and not like an intelligent Human and Applejack having sex. Maybe you know what i mean, if both are intelligent i can like it, as long as no one overdoes it with the heat circle thing or simply the sex, but this was a bit weird.
I want to say, i think i like it more if they cuddle a bit too, variety and everything in masses you know, but this time it was mostly the thing, that i had to think about it like "Zoophilie".
I can´t stop reading, but i don´t like it that everytime i feel like they still have no time to recover from anything weird that happens around them. Then in a guest chapter, that doesn´t happen in the real story (i guess it is called not canon), Applejack tried to seduce the intelligent Human, and i liked that more, but he was fleeing the farm befor something happend
To make it even better, in one chapter he accidently got teleported right on top of Celestia in her bed and well, it was just funny but in the chase your are interessted i don´t want to make a to huge spoiler.
It is romance/dark i guess, well pretty much actually.
Like i said i just don´t like the feeling that that their situation is still bad, and only little things are bugging me but i could not stop reading. If you want i give you the name of the story, it has currently 52 chapters i believe, because of that i can´t stop reading.
5548919 What's the name of that story?
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Your Human and You
If this doesn´t work i try to give you a link, but i hope there is only one story named like this.
5547606 my question is how the heck did she intice Maud?! Shes like living stone man
ooookay....this chapter then
Okay. Seriously? You make one of my favorite characters, Octavia into another bigot like AJ and THEN go and have her ENCOURAGE the exact thing she just said WAS SIN. It just didn't make sense.
*Jaw drop* Welp, I'd say there goes my ship but I like vinyl more so its not too much of a loss.
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Yeah, it was an idea I want to make Octavia marry a stallion but i ended up not doing it. Good old Vinyl X Octy is nice though.