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So, how did her father's attempted suicide inspire Trixie's ursa story? I'm guessing Maud is the reason Trixie changed her mind about same-sex relationship? I feel bad for Twilight though.
you forgot a "w" i think
do you have to add Trixies name here? i am not sure, but it is all in orange, what i think that could be missing.
a sweet sight for me and sad moment for Twilight, because i knew exactly the same moment, that she still wasn´t really happy.
And only to be sure, Mary slapped Trixie and not Trixie Mary right?
I think the moment the story is finished i read all of it again, it is much better then i had thought at first, i am not sure which of your storys i like more, but it could be that this is my favourite story of yours.
5610836 Thanks for pointing these out! Now i can fix them. Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it. I wanted people to be able to sympathize with Twilight in her plight.
I'm also glad you like both stories! It's hard keeping both on track.
5610161 I won't spoil who it was but it was somepony in the Pie family that changed Trixie's out look.
Except, ya know. When you physically slap your younger sister.
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I have two things about the lightening scene
1. Wouldn't AJ be able to tell she was lying?
2. Wouldn't AJ already know she wasn't afraid of lightening after the whole sleepover episode? Then again, that was a long time ago canonically