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This will only end badly for all the primary instigators of this fiasco. I just don't know to what degree.
The instigators will have to face retribution. But at least we know it'll be epic!
Probably not....
Who knows?
i am not sure if i should be on Applejacks side right now or not, if Applejack needs time after she was nearly raped, i would not think to bad of her.
But to be honest, she really had to apologize for her actions.
i thought she would say something like she want to try it, but i guess this means more or less the same, maybe she already likes Twilight a little bit after she noticed that Twilight loved her.
For a moment i thought it would go like Trixie VS Elements = Trixie wins
Trixie VS Boulder = Boulder the pet stone wins It would have been funny, but i guess i would not have really liked it that much, at least not as a real end.
Do you described the creature in the episode with Twilight, Cadance and Discord?
Whatever you do for the end, i think i would like it if Maud would not win with a single action next chapter, i think you should it make more look like it would be a risky move, and that she maybe got lucky. I say it like that, because it would be a bit weird if Maud would win to obviously/ easy against that powerfull amulet, i mean it looked like Trixie would be faster than Rainbow Dash with the amulet.
In the end it was a very good chapter again,.....i still have to search for the time i am able to continue with the rewritten chapters.
Don´t take me to seriously, if i read something i start to write my comment right away, most of the time right after that, i suddenly see the explanation for what was supposed to happen, or something like that. That is why i first thought Rarity would want something else from Applejack, even if Twilight was a victim it would be nice, if she would give Applejack something to apologize to her.
5983419 Well stay tuned cause a new chapter is about to come out in a few minutes!
And no the creature is actually something I took from magic the gathering and gave it a makeup name so not to get copyright strike. The creature if you're interested is called the crystalline sliver. It's from a trading card game.
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5983429 looks good, and yeah i like Trading card games, they are just to expensive, and i know to less people who play something like that.
As much as i like it, i think i read that chapter later, i am hardly able to read everything, and do much around the house right now.
I don´t know when i can read it today.
5983471 Well whenever. Don't burn yourself out on my account.
Not like the chapters going anywhere.