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I think i would like for a few emotions if her mother is in ponyville.
What i mean is, i remember that her mother was leaving her father, and he keept Trixie if i remember it right, but trixies mother wanted to keep her at first right? I don´t know if it is your background, or something common.
Well even if her mother probably wasn´t doing much wrong, it would be still nice to see her blaming herself a bit, or Maud could be angry at Trixies mother, just because she is so protective. If it happened like i think it does, i guess no one of them has any real fault, but i think both of them should have a serious talk, and both of them have to apologize.
I expect her mother to be playfull, and not very serious about this matter, and because of this Trixie would be allowed to be angry with her, i guess this would be the moment for her mother to apologize, and Trixie could apologize for not trying to speak with her sooner.
It would seems to be wrong if Trixie would accept it without any real talk.
Befor i knew that her mother had a Marefriend, i wanted to ask why she was licking that other Pony against her will, but i forgot that this wasn´t that kind of story, i guess i am still a bit alarmed.
However, for a bonus chapter it was nice, maybe nothing special, and not my favourite, but really nice.
5995178 I have a big plan for Trixie's mother and her. Hope you like what happens. It won't be as bad since Trixie stated she had time to get over it, but I think you'll be satisfied.
And yes, she did want to keep Trixie but her father won the court case for guardianship. We clearly know how well that worked out in the end! Poor, Trixie.
Curious, what didn't you like about the chapter? I know you said it wasn't bad but it wasn't good either. That's what I got, so what didn't you like? Just wondering, not saying you are bad or anything, I was just wondering about your thoughts.
5997861 I guess i usually prefer it if i know more about the main char, sometimes i am just a bit dissapointed, if i have a Background/flaschback chapter or something. I know this was just the notion for one, or two new Characters, but i hoped for Trixie in this chapter.
You could say i just hoped for to much in this one chapter, and it was less then i expected, but still good after i noticed her mother didn´t did it for a different reason, as she did what she did. To make sure i got that one sentence right, like i said befor, i didn´t liked what her mother did befor i knew that it was her Marefriend, but then it was okay.
To be honest i guess i missed that part where Trixie herself said she got over it, but yeah i still hope for a few feelings between them, i guess her mother don´t know what happened with Trixie right? I just don´t want, that if Trixie should get angry at first, that her mother would look like an Angel. No real reason.
The thing with Maud, well i just really like it, if she is protective, and don´t believes others at first, kind of what she did with Mary at first.
I guess Maud is, well like that, Mary would be very polite, and probably eager to meet Trixies mother.
Platinum is probably very shy/nervous at the meeting, because well we talked about her role, and i think it would somehoe fit.
5999538 Well, I wasn't expecting that kind of response. I was afraid you disliked what I wrote all this time!
Glad you liked it. The next few chapters will be a bit more relaxed after all the crazy I wrote. Plus if you read the bonus chapter you can get a sneak peek at what's coming next.
Oh and thanks for the fave!
I KNEW Trixie's mother was with AJ's mother. I'm a little confused as to why Trixie would try to contact her mother. Didn't her father kill himself because she left? I also expect AJ to not be to happy to see her mother at all.
As for the spire scene, I would hazard to guess that Sombra is involved somehow.
6010424 That's a very GOOD assumption. That however is a story for a later story- I mean chapter. Yes chapter!
But as for Trixie's mother I think the next chapter will explain most of it. There will be a few parts to it though, AJ will get a part too. Just wait till they all meet up.
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