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I am not sure, but it looked like Mary didn´t really thought about how Trixie felt about the situation, and only tried to defend her mother, and tried to force peace onto both of them.
I don´t like it that much, but i can understand why Tournover was angry as her love was crying in her arms.
I didn´t like it that much, that Trixie had the most fault in here, i knew that Trixies mother haven´t done much wrong, because she just loved someone else, and other stuff, but at the same time like she said, she should have checked more on what Trixie was doing.
I didn´t heard that she wasn´t allowed near Trixie.
I am not sure how to say this, but i guess i am a bit dissapointed, that it looked, like no one could even start to understand Trixies view of the things, no one is really fault at anything, but her mother isn´t a better pony in this matter too. I guess you now what i mean, i just hope Trixies mother doesn´t get a special treatment.
I just wait, since it isn´t over, but i hope it isn´t just Trixie who is getting a good scolding, i would like a fair treatment, for both of them.
I am not sure what i should think about Applejacks mother, i was used to the idea, that they are dead, so it is a bit weird for me to have her suddenly at her door, but i am not totally against the idea.
The chapter itself was a nice one, but i am already a bit worn, because i had read 12 chapters about Rainbow, and her mental condition, she was reduced to a filly, that means i need a break, or else i can´t really savor any other storys.
Don´t worry, i know you have probably planned something, but i can´t do much else, then to react to what is already here.
Long story short, i am more or less on Misty veils side, but i really understand trixie here, and somehow i don´t think it is fair that everyone is against her right now, they could at least be more patient. The chapter is written pretty good i think, but i remember Applejack still have to apologize to Applebloom right?
6013391 Don't worry I get it. You're just burnt out from all the reading you did and you can at least see where I was going with the meeting between Trixie and her mother.
Hopefully after a break you can enjoy it more.
I get that occasionally, I read so much then I just can't read anymore for a while. It happens. i still thank you for sticking with this story as long as you did. A lot of people didn't so this means a lot too me so, thank you.
6015782 well there is actually very little wrong with it, only the little things i personally prefer in a different way, or a...different approach? Like how i said, that i thought they would be a bit to impatient,, and they don´t really try to understand Trixie right now.
One one hand i think Trixies mother can understand her a little bit, but on the other hoof it looks like she just thinks that Trixie needs to calm down, and would think that she has not even a little bit fault, for not looking for Trixie more often.
Now that i am well rested, i think that you maybe planned to make Mary or the others realize Trixies view of the things later in another chapter, and then they maybe apologize a bit.
Like i said, i think everyone of them did something wrong, maybe not Turnover, but even if she is Mistys Marefriend, i don´t think that she can say that much in that matter, but i don´t know how long she knows about Trixie.
I haven´t read it a second time till now, but i remember much of it. I nearly forgot about Maud, or Platinum, if Mary is on the side of her mother, then there are still two other ponys (Maud), that could be able to understand Trixie more.
I think Maud knows more about Trixie than her own mother, and i don´t really mean it in a bad way.
There just have to be someone (Maud) that would be able to have a neutral view of the things, and can understand both of them, or just defend Trixie. After they argued a bit, Trixie and Misty could apologize to each other , and well....just a part of the idea.
I admit that i am not really neutral, and i am often on the side of the chidren if soething like this happens, but usually the mature ponys/people doesn´t really try to understand the children in such moments. (yeah i am talking a little bit about those unrealistic tv series, or at least overdramatic.)
6015828 That's surprisingly deep thought you put into this. I don't mean to sound rude, but it sounds like you went through something similar like I did. I actually got inspiration or this part of the story on something similar that happened to me and my family. Obviously I didn't kill a direbear but I had an argument with my mother about leaving my father and me.
Still hope you like the next part. There's a reason I separated the group, Maud included, but you seemed to have caught on already.
6021293 oh i already like that, again i am happy that it looks like i would think in the right direction.
Well something like that indeed happened, but i think you could say i am just very interessted in such situations, that is maybe a bit overstated, but sometimes i think i could have learned to be a psychologist, i can easily learn about stuff like this.
I guess i, or should i say we are more sensitive about stuff like that, i mean we can......think better about this stuff? (Not sure how to say it, i mean it in a good way).
This could be one reason why i am more interessted in your storys, than some of the others, because sometimes they go deeper, or just have many.....plots?! which i like.
I feel like i would start to say dumb stuff next, so i stop for now, just know that i am happy to read more, have a good Night.
6021447 Good night friend!
I wanted to point this out first:
Don't you mean before?
In any case, it seems Trixie wanted to forgive her mother, but when she saw her, everything came rushing back. Mary should have stayed out of family business. Oh well. Am I mistaken, or is Trixie's mom an earth pony and Applejack's mom a unicorn? And where are Maud and Platinum?
6067801 Yeah, I meant before. Thanks.
Yes, Trixie's mother is an earth pony and Applejack's mother is a unicorn.
I Admit I did follow a very typical anime style reaction from Trixie to her mother after she returned. Hence why she wrote the letter in the first place to her.
I won't spoil anymore than that but I think you'll like where this bit of irony, in the mothers being opposites of each others daughters.