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5365119 OK! Cutie mark crusader clop readers away! After work tomorrow. I actually have to get up at 8am Calif time. So I'll read some of them tomorrow and I'll provide you with some feedback and criticism.
If you want you can read any of my three I currently have. I'm working on a challenge to ship Trixie with as many ponies as possible before the end of the year.
I don´t know if it is going to be as calm as it looks right now, but i like what i have read tonight.
Mayor Mare is maybe not my favourite Pony, but she is somewhere in the middle and i think it is an interessting Pairing.
If i can ask for a Pairing, i think i would like to try a TrixieXPinkie Pie (Just because it seems akward and interessting a bit, TrixieXFluttershy, (i am not that sure about Trixie X Applejack, but i could maybe like TrixeXRarity), but i have seen enough TrixieXRainbow Dash or TrixieXTwilight.
I really like TwilightXTrixie, but i think i would like to read something different.
I would like TrixieZecora or TrixieX.......Cadance? too, i just want to see something different too. I think it would be something new if Cadance would brake up with Shining and start to date Trixie.
Long story short, i think i start to like this story already and if they are not to short storys then i would like to try the other ones too.
Just to be sure, someone said i sound like it would like and hate a story at the same time in every comment i make, is it really that bad?
I mean i just try to say what i like and if i am not sure about something then i can´t change it. I think that everyone can decide for themself what they want to hear, if they want to hear only bad things, then they only hear bad things, but i think i can´t be always really that bad.
5366897 No you sound fine! You just voice your opinion and that's OK.
I'm glad you like the story so far. Unlike Wonderbolt my Heart there will be little to no action in the actual story. It'll make sense in the next chapter or so while Trixie is working. I can see why people say you sound like a love and hate, but to me you sound like you want to read more before you make a final call on whether you like something or dislike it. at least a few chapters. Am I right in that assumption?
Not to sound mean but it could also be because you're German and I'm assuming English is a second or possibly a third language for you too. To others it may seem that way but I'm fine with how you say things. I wasn't expecting you to rad this one though. Most people don't like Mayor Mare as she's called in the show, I like to call her Mary. Aside from Trixie she's actually my second favorite character in the show. I always wanted to pair/ship these two together.
I agree there is enough Twilightxtrixie but RainbowxTrixie I've only seen a few. Cadence... hmm... I'll make one just for you as part of my challenge to ship Trixie with as many ponies as possible by the end of the year! It'll be a short story but I'll make it just for you! Cutie Mark Crusader Shippers Away!
5366926 I think it is safe to say that you pretty much, understand how i try to do my comments most of the time. And yes sometimes i think it is, because i don´t know how to write it better, but most of the time i don´t want to hate a story to early.
I think it would be not fair to hate something with only one or two chapters, in which usually don´t much happen, that is why i say what i like and what i would not like.
Good enough of that, it seems you understand me and i am fine with that.
I don´t know, i somehow like Mayor Mare or Mary, even if she is not one of my top ten, but i still like her more than Shining armor Cadance and some other characters.
PS: you don´t have to do Cadance,(but i would still read it)< it was just a suggestion, i think i would rather like to see something about Pinkie, because i am always curious how she would act towards a possible special somepony which isn´t like herself (Cheese Sandwich).
I don´t want to call Chesse Sandwich and Pinkie a bad Pairing, but for me it is a bit boring because they are the same somehow.
Well i maybe even start to read your old story too, i don´t know about that StarGate theme, but it is about Tixie and, i like your storys, and i have not much to read at the moment.
5368516 Oh you must mean my story Adventures Across Space. Yeah that's a star Trek Enterprise crossover I put on hold in favor of Wonderbolt my Heart and others first. That one is a side side project I work on when I feel like it actually.
Don't worry I'll get to something new soon. I like that you are always around so keep commenting!
Might want to build a corral, a bunch of your commas have wandered off!
6954236 Damn commas always running off on their own!
I hate commas. Not matter how much I read on them someone always says somethings wrong with them! Darn evil vile things! Well, to be fair I am very lazy and writing was never my strong point. I failed Writing twice in High School and the only thing i was worse at was math.
Other than that whole thing which I will endeavor to remedy, how you enjoying stuff?
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I thought AJ said to start at sunrise? Why does granny say Noon? not sure if this is something I'll understand in the next chapter but either way it causes for confusion for someone reading straight through