Page generated in 0.018 seconds
Total duration
595 users online
718,403 hits today, 1,887,535 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I think what you said on top, you meant to put on the bottom. If I didn't know better, I would swear that the observer was either Chrysalis or Sombra. Meanwhile, I wonder how Applejack is taking everything that is happening? It is mostly her fault after all. BTW,
I hope Trixie had a good lawyer.
5978938 Thanks for that!
I didn't even realized I put sued. I know a perfect lawyer for her if she decides to get sued.
vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/ncis/images/7/73/Vlcsnap-2012-03-21-17h57m27s119.png/revision/latest?cb=20120321175840
As for the mysterious figure that will have to wait for another day.
In the meantime, Applejack will have to face this eventually.
Nice chapter, but i need a break, i had read a bit to much right now, just because i could not stop.
I hope this isn´t going to end to soon, but if it does, please make an open end for the story, then you can make a herd sequel, maybe with Adoption, and such things if you feel like it, you now a side poject.
Like i said good job, it maybe sounds weird if i say this so many times, but i want to say something each chaper, and i can´t help myself if i just repeat some words.
I really always think that you make a good choice for your story, that is why i didn´t stopped to read it, because it looked like rape at first.
5980244 Don't worry. Like it told Frankie2, if there will ever be a rape scene I will tell you guys. This was a risky move on my part I admit, but it was necessary, in my mind at least, to show just how far the amulet is willing to go and fulfill the bearers desires. I went a bit over the top with i t I admit, but.... eh, I felt it was necessary at the time.
True I do need to go over it again, but still I feel that it will be a hard change, but I'll do it for the fans!
5981355 i thought you had something in mind, and tried not to think to hard of it, it looks like i was right, but yeah it still got that reaction out of me.
I guess a cliffhanger with something like that was the risky part, however i am willing to say good job.
5981372 Well I just made the minor revision so it'll hopefully be more clear now than it was before. What do you think? Thanks for trusting me instead of assuming the worst in me!