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6006914 Yeah I did, ops. Herp derp derpy derp derp!
Well, thanks for showing me this so I can fix it.
I am not sure why i am a bit wary about her mom, but to be honest, i am only a little...little little bit war right now, i think i start to like her.
I guess you know it till now, i have the habit to think of the worst thing that could happen, if i already had a bad example from somewhere. (at least sometimes)
I didn´t liked that Daring Doo part that much, but you had written it good enough, just personal preference.
It seems that her mom has the same habit of boasting as Trixie had, i know she is a Showmare, and she possible just have to make sure, that she keeps her image as a start, but if she wants to have a private meeting, her magic tricks are maybe a bit to much.
,,Here comes the great, and powerfull mother ( i would choose a happy face, but i wanted one with Trixie)
Good job, it seems i am able to finish my storys, and i can continue with the rewritten chapters soon.
edit: I noticed you are one of the only people, i never forget to read the authors note.
6007001 Oh, by the way, I'm taking your annotation in the comment and using it for the title of the next chapter. I was having trouble coming up with a name what you called Trixie's mom just sounded right for the chapter, so thought I'd let you know so I don't offend you.
6007812 nah i am actually happy if i can give some ideas, but thank you.
I don´t know why i want Trixies mother not to be perfect, i noticed, that i really want that she still has to make it up for Trixie, i mean that she had a hard time, i guess this is a situation in her life, where none of them could have done everything right, so i don´t blame her, but i think she would have to apologize, that she didn´t tried i more often to talk to Trixie.
Till now i can only say that it looked like her mother just waited for Trixie to write her. I guess you could just use it like that.
I'm still waiting for the REAL fireworks to start. And I don't mean from a performance of some sort.
6013929 Well, there will be many theatrics and drama. fireworks DEFINITELY!