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i can understand him, but i guess even then he wasn´t allowed to shove her to the ground, there are at least two or more reason why, but i choose the reason, because they should not fight befor the children. Weird that i have a little problem with Big Mac using his power against others, and not that much against the actions Applejack took against the children. I guess it has to do something with Big Mac himself, i accept him more than some other ponies, but he isn´t my favourite ponie, he isn´t written that good in every story. EDIT: i guess it could be because he knows he is that strong, and even if it isn´t necessary to stop his sister, he still shoved her.
was it because of the memorie spell, or why did she attacked Zecora? I would believe that the Zebra would not allow it, if she would notice the spell, so i guess that is the reason.
She knew her new name a bit to fast i guess, i don´t have anything against it, i just prefer it if they have to think about it first.
Ohhh that is going to be the greates shock in Applejack´s life, maybe we get a crazy Twilight.
As you mentioned the whisper, i started to believe, the moment they noticed that, would make them to think about how much fault Trixie really had in this. Of course i think in this story she wanted it for a part, but right now i think it could be that the amulet was the reason for most of it.
I don´t know if i want Applejack to like that, or if i want to change Twilight back sooner or later.
I feel like i could say more, but i am affraid i would repeat myself, so i just let you answer the stuff you want, maybe after that i talk about more.
Good work again, i like it.
Threesome!
Well Twilight went stir crazy quickly. Come on, gender changing, the alicon amulet, knocking out Zecora, this is not going to end well.
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Let's face it. Twilight isn't known for her emotional tact. Smarty Pants, weddings, etc.
A threesome? Hmm. I'm not sure I'm that good at writing to do such a thing. I might if the fans demand it enough.
5712598 Zecora was hit in the head by a stick. Applejack being knocked down from over by Big Mac so she didn't hurt DT and AB. As you've seen in the past AJ isn't the most stable these last few days. Stable.Pony. Get it? Get the joke? Anyway I Hope you guys liked the chapter and I plan to make things interesting later!
5713832 yeah i think i just thought he would be able to hold her back, i think i just thought he would act different, not that i mind it, i don´t hate it, since he didn´t act like his sister would not even have a change.
Don´t mind me, in certain situations question something that could even only look like power abuse. (It is late again, but i still hope i make some sense)
Normally i only don´t like it if Unicorns force anyone to do things they want with their magic, because i think that even Equestria would not allow them to abuse others in any way with their magic, it get´s worse if they do this with Humans.
It is not that serious as it sounds, i like the chapter, but i am still as much wary as i am exited to see what Male Twilight would do next.
5713893 I'm glad you think so. I knew you didn't mean it in a bad way I understand power abuse as well. I use to be like that myself once. Thinking if you didn't show dominance you ere nothing. I got over it as I grew up though so now I try my best to not do that sort of thing.
I can't wait to make AJs reaction to Twilight. Someone who hates homosexuals sees her friend gender swap can't say you hate them now can you? Or can she? Makes you wonder about the moral implications don't it?
I refused to read after the Twilight came up with the idea of becoming a stallion. I do not want to know what happens with Twilight at this point. I am going to be skipping anything involving Twilight the stallion. I know it will cause more harm than good. I'll just concentrate on Trixie and Mary, maybe the fillies. Definitely if Maud bumps into Applejack.
5738807 Sorry you feel that way.
Don't worry it'll be a minor note. Hope you're ready for what comes next even though I ruined it with Twilight. A lot of people hated that. Oh well, it's my story and part of the main plot so I'm sticking to it. Hope you guys can forgive me in the long run.
5739507 "You can't please all the people all the time."
Do what you feel you want/need to do with your stories. If someone don't like it, they'll stop reading. Personally, I really want to see what happens with the main plot (Trixie x Mary), so I don't plan on going anywhere.
5740052 Thanks for understanding. I was afraid you'd be like yourbronygod and immediately jump ship at the first thing they didn't like. Thank for sticking around.
5743214 ...wow. Thanks. I love being called out as some jerk or something.
I don't jump ship at the first thing I don't like. What I DO is wade through what I don't like for a story that as a whole I'd been enjoying until I can no longer take it.
Which is what I'm feeling after this chapter.
AJ is a complete bitch. No other word for it. She THREATENS her own flesh and blood along with the daughter of someone who's family is tightly connected to their own (the rich family aiding the founding of Ponyville alongside the Apples. Unless that didn't happen in your AU)
Despite apparently feeling like she made Trixie feel bad by pushing her affection on her, Maud keeps kissing and showing affection.
Mayor Mare is acting like a much, much younger mare than she is. Constantly running away from everything. Then again, there is the whole past heartbreak thing. But she still feels like a teen/young adult
Everyone cries so easily it's like their eyes are on constant tap. I mean, with how hard of a life Trixie's already had, you'd think she'd be able to hold her tears back better.
You mentioned multiple times how badly AJ beat Trixie up but you never once actually mention any of the damage she took later on. You don't even make any mention of bandaging any cuts or putting ice on any bruises. We don't feel any sort of impact because it was just treated as a single plot point and thrown away.
While I'm NOT against the idea with Twilight as knowing her usual jumps in logic when she gets herself mentally cornered but the way she treats Zecora is kinda out there regardless.
THIS is why I stop reading. I enjoyed this story. I really did. I was excited to know what was going to happen how it would end. I really and honestly was.
But the fact is, too many things that I didn't like kept getting repeated over and over and then even more things kept getting introduced.
So yeah. I wish you the best but I'm done with this. I read 19 chapters of this so I can't say I didn't give it a chance.