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I don´t know what to think about it. How long does Derpy remember her? Right now i think it was maybe even right, and really nice of her to allow Derpy to go after Trixie with her new found feelings. On the other Hand, if she should remember her befor she thought that Mary could maybe love Trixie, then i would have asked why she didn´t wanted to love her again.
Oh i thought the Mayor would maybe even hit Applejack for something like that, that looks like a religious Applejack again or something like that
I don´t know if you want the Mayor to have an unlucky love life, or if you want her to be reunited with Derpy in the end, but even if i think that Platinum and Trixie probably don´t be together forever, it is already sad if i know they have to break up probably.
Good Chapter.
Mary is really having a rough night, isn't she? And what is Applejack's problem? I hope Granny Smith and Big MacIntosh didn't raise her like that. Or is Applejack in denial 'cause she loves some mare? I like the idea of Trixie x Platinum, but that's not why I started to read this. I hope Mary and Trixie can get on the same page at least. I expect Trixie's first day at the farm is going to be full of tension.
5400906 Oh yeah, Mary is going to continue to have a bad day too. I was actually going to originally have Mary in a relationship with Twilight Sparkle and have conflicting feeling for Trixie and vice versa. I decided not to do that though.
I wasn't sure if anyone else would feel it was the same old thing so I made Trixie like someone else. Applejack was raised in a family based on tradition but that's not what started this. Don't worry it gets better.
5400397 Well Derpy is a nice mare and mother. Mary will go after Trixie but how is up in the air. If yo udidn't catch, Mary is prone to jealousy.
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Oh i know, she is angry right now right?
Well this was at least my first reaction, right now i am eager to read more
Huh, Aj is incredibly stupid. Really? Homophobia in a civilisation with such a gender imbalance? That's disappointing that the apples of all families would fail basic good manners and respect.
6613677 I just realized you said homophobia. It's not homophobia silly.
She hates fillyfoolers. Big difference.
aj thats racist
Two things.
One, maybe the bolded part of the first paragraph should be separate from AJ's part. different lines for different speakers and all that.
Two. This REALLY makes AJ sound like a child. It feels really out of character and the whole "Fillyfooling makes you a horrible person" Just sounds like something you expect to hear from like a seven year old or something.
You shall die, THOT!!!
What the flipping Luna!? What is all this hate!? I'd expect it from a side character or Twilight but Applejack at this level!?
That's what happens in life. You wait too long and... This.
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