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Talk about a convenient storm. Well, Mary stepped up to the plate. I wonder how Platinum will handle that proclamation, and how long before Maud shows up.
5555933 Yeah, I'm not sure if I ever mentioned this but I use many metaphorical reference in my stories. The pegasis working the clouds for a storm was the metaphorical 'calm before the storm'.
I used them before and will always use them. It's a thing I do to all my work, written of art, with few exceptions. Hope you guys like what comes next! A big surprise awaits you!
5557182 I'm sorry I don't see any of your metaphors while I'm reading this. I see them as what really happens. I actually thought it was a storm started by Rainbow Dash to stop Trixie and Applejack from fighting.
5557376 Sorry I'm not that clever.
5557624 I guess the fight will brake out anyway huh? I don´t have much to say this time, i am just curious at how they will convince Applejack, that fillyfooling isn´t such a bad thing.
Applejack started to attack the mayor right?
edit: your cover is beautifull, i like Trixie like that.
quick question, can i say "ps: " in english if i forget to write something? I don´t know if this works only in germany, maybe this is actually a short for something in english grammar.
5560887 PS is like saying in addition to, or a side note. I actually don't know what it stands for though. Sorry.
5560887 PS Thanks for commenting on my cover art. It was just something I made in like 30 mins. Not my best work but I thought it was nice. Also everytime I see it, I'm so use to not having cover art, I actually think it's a new Trixie story honestly. It's embarrassing.
5563152 well it is definitely not ugly, she got a new look yes, but i like it, not just her the whole pciture fits for me.
Are- are you serious? That is...stupidly over the top. Just way out there. I can understand why you might have wanted to go for that but I honestly think there was a better way to go about it. Maybe Trixie says that if AJ wins she can choose her prize and AJ says that Trixie can't use magic again since it's already done enough damage or something. In return Trixie scoffs and asks if AJ would like her to just get rid of the horn completely which AJ says something like "Wouldn't be a bad idea" Then mayor mare could pop in. I just think that would have been a much more realistic and understandable way to go about it.