• Member Since 21st Dec, 2012
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allpowerfulsharkgod


king of the ocean. God of sharks.

Comments ( 15 )

I'm sorry, but this is a very badly written story, with no proper story whatsoever. It needs a lot of development, a fixed storyline, and LOTS OF EDITING.

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Comment posted by theguysaidhi deleted Nov 19th, 2014

youu maybe could have made a good fanfiction here, but it turned out soooooo bad.

just
wtf is this

Story seems to serve no other purpose than to kill Fluttershy as far as I can tell.. So sorry but the lack a proper story makes this nothing more than a I hate Fluttershy kind-of fanfic .. At least that is what it read like..

I could feel the angst. The love hexagon. (counting all the heads obviously) We've all been there. We've been there.

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Finally, someone has seen my true artistic vision. :raritystarry:

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