Ill-content with his life in Ponyville, Discord looks for a way to aleve his growing sense of boredom. Believing his is sincere, Fluttershy suggests helping ponies in ways only he can. And Discord has such a unique way to help ponies in need...
I'm sorry, but this is a very badly written story, with no proper story whatsoever. It needs a lot of development, a fixed storyline, and LOTS OF EDITING.
Story seems to serve no other purpose than to kill Fluttershy as far as I can tell.. So sorry but the lack a proper story makes this nothing more than a I hate Fluttershy kind-of fanfic .. At least that is what it read like..
I'm sorry, but this is a very badly written story, with no proper story whatsoever. It needs a lot of development, a fixed storyline, and LOTS OF EDITING.
WALL OF TEEEEEEEEEEEEXT!
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It's indented
youu maybe could have made a good fanfiction here, but it turned out soooooo bad.
just
wtf is this
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Oh... you know... words.
Story seems to serve no other purpose than to kill Fluttershy as far as I can tell.. So sorry but the lack a proper story makes this nothing more than a I hate Fluttershy kind-of fanfic .. At least that is what it read like..
I could feel the angst. The love hexagon. (counting all the heads obviously) We've all been there. We've been there.
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Finally, someone has seen my true artistic vision.