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Lauzac


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Mature content, heavily farting and facesitting based story.

It seems that the author's supposed fetish of farts has stricken another story again.

Yet another awesome fartfic! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

I like this story but I afraid that may have to say no for this sorry, how ever I will click Like

Well I have a fart fetish. Nuff said.:pinkiecrazy:

I'm wondering why Dash is accusing anon of being a perv, when she's from a universe where nudity isn't a big deal.

Visuals of anthro dash pressing her butt against anon and letting her gut rip were enticing, but one thing I'll never grasp is why authors like to describe in detail the "rank, putrid, oh-so-disgustingness" of the act. That's not really something I myself find enticing about the ordeal, I'm more into the heat of the air, the sweetness of the aroma and the act of release. Oh well.

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Thanks for the criticism. I guess the style more focused on the olfactophilia appeal than anything else. I'm sorry it wasn't to your liking, I'm still a pretty terrible author and have lots to work on. Tips like yours to keep in mind always help, so thank you once again!

As for everyone else, I appreciate the kind words and not-so-thrilled reactions! I'm sorry if the content isn't most people's cup of tea, but you're by no means obligated to read this particular story. I don't intend for this to be the only genre I cater to, though!

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Thanks for teaching me a new word; I never thought about what attraction to smells was called.
And that's fine to have something focused on smells of course. What I'm saying is, I would think if you wanted to show your readers that this is something you and other people are attracted to, you would want to present Dash's farts in an attractive way, not "foul, dank, disgusting" if that makes any sense. But you're not the only one to write scat-content that follows that style, so I can't really qualify that as a mistake, more just something I get tired of seeing.

If you're into this sort of kink, you might want to read some of my stories, or Pervertigo.

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I was aiming for unwillingness and submission to be a big part of this story. I know a decent sized number of fetishists out there like the shame, humiliation, and unpleasantness factors perhaps more than consensual and "into it" stories. Nothing wrong with either, different strokes for different folks is all. Personally, I chose the former mindset rather than the latter: the character certainly isn't pleased with the circumstances, but maybe the reader is.

And yes, I've read both. Each of you are talented writers and I hope you two keep it up. :pinkiehappy:

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