Putting their differences aside from competing against one another in an Iron Pony competition, Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack have discovered a new talent to put to the test this time around. Unfortunately for Twilight Sparkle, she is the unwilling judge for this competition and what it means to be victorious lands solely on her nose! One pony will will be crowned winner, the other will smell the stench of defeat, but both will learn a valuable lesson when it comes to flatulence.
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::LOL:: I'm reminded of the Great Crepitation Contest of 1946: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2FyD95Hv7CU
You magnificent bastard
When I realized what Rarity was doing, that's when I stopped being sorry I chose to read this horrifying lil' tale...
Again: you magnificent bastard. I am soooo trolled...
Next should be a foul smelling hoof contest XD
Okay.
Premise/Idea is great.
Execution needs work, though. Grammar, pacing, the like.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png LOOOOOOOL
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Did you always have that unusually fitting avatar pic, or did you change it special for this particular story?
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I actually didn't notice just how much the original formatting changed upon copy and paste until just now. It looks fine in Microsoft Word so my apologies for not being more careful. I'll be triple checking my double check next chapter.
Can you please point out the grammatical errors that I may have overlooked? It's always nice to have a second set of eyes looking for these issues.
Twilight was quite the lucky judge.
LOL rarity farts gracefully
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Hey! You commented!
2720359 Yups I did, twilight don't push to hard, you might poop. heh heh, your right sorry.
This is actually pretty well made but Twilight could totally sue for tortue/fart smelling?