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there is not enough of this character, saved, loved it ^-^
The story was good but the description made me think there was a third party. There were several scenes that would have been better if a different word had been used it is not the best idea to use the slang term for the organ more than once in a row also it seamed rather rushed at the end. All in all it was decent
TDG
502713 The Diabolic Gnome, huh?
So, about the story...
... I didn't read it, I'll do it later
Decided to read it now, It was pretty okay, but could've been better.
Good nevertheless! ;)
dafuq
ahahahHAHHAHAHAHA
what
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So why was it a 1st person Fluttershy? Weird choice, but this was okay.
... I don't even know.
*likes*
I think that there is enough leftover plot to make a few more chapters, you write very well sir/ma'am.
If it could be redone but with regular point it would have been better.
502898 Was the first part of your comment directed at me???
Why do i like it when ponies get transformed into changelings?
Great story really enjoyed it
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I need some brain bleach...no, I need a brain nuke.
This is what I get for reading something written in second person. *facepalm*
I'll still give you my thumbs up, because this was still well written, but... gah. You officially killed the part of my headcanon that contained a Changling Fluttershy. I'm serious, you did.
503225 u mean 2nd person 1st is with I/Me 2nd is You 3rd is {name}
...Interesting
504595 Yes, my mistake.
504539
rofl at that image
this fic was...... AMAZING!!!! O.O
@image for overall story of fic, yes i like you :3
not bad for a second person POV
At first: Oh my...
Then: Oh no....
Later: Oh NO!
Chrysalis is EVIL!
that is not a bad thing by the way
None can resist the Siren song of futashy
I'm not gonna lie...I'm very aroused right now.
Were in the bloody hell is my mind bleach?
805284 your comment made me cry laughing
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don't know about you, but this stops being creepy and becomes absolutely hilarious when you
GIZOOGLE DIS SHIZNIT!
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Oh my god, that's amazing LOL
This story is awesome!
I can't seem to find a proper way to describe it...
But the way you look into Fluttershy's perspective during all of
this makes it very arousing.
This was an.....interesting read. Not the best work I've read, but certainly not the worst. Not that I'm a good judge of this, but I liked it so whatever.
Have to wonder, is this an alternate version where Chrysalis won or is Chrysalis doing this because she needs to recover. Also I like the ending due to the possibilities it leaves open.
On one hand you can imagine that they form a wonderful relationship or that Chrysalis merely sees her as a tool, whatever floats your boat basically.
Anyway, nice job.