My Little Pony Shadow of Fear

A old nightmare has come back to haunt Celestia and Luna. This creature is worst than Nightmare Moon and more powerful than Lord Tirek. It will not stop from taking over Equestria and the creature want Twilight to be its Queen.

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Cheesey Microwave

Cheesey Microwave #1 · Feb 10th, 2015 · 2 · ·

The grammar was so horrible, it's like a bad grammar avalanche fell on your plot, leaving nothing more than the tip of a "meh" idea sticking out of a pile of garbage. Get an editor.

Cheesey Microwave

Cheesey Microwave #2 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · ·

5608101 Hello, new stalker! As you have graced me with some lovely pony pictures, I will give you my reaction to first seeing this story.

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PoniPrinceofPleasure

PoniPrinceofPleasure #3 · Feb 10th, 2015 · 1 · ·

A old nightmare has come back to haunt Celestia and Luna. This creature is worst than Nightmare Moon and more powerful than Lord Tirek. It will not stop from taking over Equestria and the creature want Twilight to be its Queen.

"Its name is Blood-Drenched Terrors, and it is an elder god from before time began. Long ago, Luna and Celestia tried to destroy it but they only succeeded in trapping it away for two-thousand years. It is even bigger and more scarier than Discord and it is a very dangerous and monstrous enemy, who is much more violent and mature than any of the other enemies that we have fought."

null_name5656

null_name5656 #4 · Feb 10th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Why does RD look like she's trippin' on something in the cover art? Looks like she found Fluttershy's stash of shrooms.

SpookyPrincesssa

SpookyPrincesssa #5 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · ·

W-what?

The Angry Dango of Doom

The Angry Dango of Doom #6 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · ·

I couldn't follow a damn thing bruh. Did you write this in another language and have GTranslate put it to english?
Because I could excuse it if you had.
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metroid_freak

metroid_freak #7 · Feb 11th, 2015 · · ·

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Can I be a stalker too?
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(My offering)

Cheesey Microwave

Cheesey Microwave #8 · Feb 11th, 2015 · · ·

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When I called her a stalker, I was referring to the fact that she had decided to follow me before posting that comment. I refer to all of my followers as stalkers, because that's basically what you're doing.

metroid_freak