It is... with great honor, that i announce Revenge of all Colours COMPLETED!

bravo, you sir did an amazing job for your first story and i thought it was amazing. you did very well for your first story and i know that you will become very successful with your writing. i can't wait to see what you have planned for the next story and i wish you the best of luck.

my story rating for you based out of the old system 5/5. very good work and even though there were some errors in grammar, i don't count that, so you did excellent.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png

Well, I won't lie, it certainly felt like someone's first story, and there were times where I was wondering why I was still bothering to read it. But the pacing was fairly well done and the plot twists were nicely horrifying. You also did a good job with the ending, maybe not the best written, but it brought a satisfactory conclusion to the story and fit in well with the pacing of it. Knowing where to end a story is something I have seen far too many authors fail at even when their writing quality is exceptional, and as the ending is the last thing in our minds as we finish the story it can be considered the most important part. I look forward to reading any future stories you post here.

677060 awesome thanks! I will be looking forward to writing it! I know I'm not the best but I'm trying! I'm just happy i managed to fit in a good ending... because as you said, it's critical!

i must say that this is truly an amazing piece of fan fiction. there were rough patches, i will admit, but for a first story, something so well created as is shows that you have amazing potential. i will be expecting great things in the future.

Ok... I know what I'm doing next. I've had this in mind for a while and looked around on FIMfiction. A few people have tried to write a story like this but they weren't so successfull... So I'm gunna try it out! You don't like it... Suck it up, cause i have a good feeling about this and my head is exploding with ideas! I won't tell you anything about it yet but I'm sure you may figure it out after I tell you the name of the story... "The Other Six"
Wish me luck! How i love gambling!

AAAAAAAAAAAH
IT ENDS!!!
and that was a great ending to it :)

Thanks me too!

Sorry for not answering earlier but, this is the perfect ending for this story...good job.

701691 No worries! Always happy to have a compliment, don't really care when or how!

well fuck...

i'll fix them tomorow.... last thing i need to do is edit late at night again... got 7 thunb downs last time i did that

713525 alright i fixed them... and honestly i don't mind being corrected... i need it! better somone who actually bothers to read the story finds my errors than somone who judges them soley on errors! i need an editor really bad

Really!? You would do that!?

YOUR FUCKIN HIRED!!! 27.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lt9tjrgETZ1qi9qvfo1_500.png

Thanks!

after reading cupcakes i always avoided any thing that had cupcakes involved
but today i decided to look for it again but instead i find this awesome story that
made me cry at the end.
For that good sir i gained the my respect back for pinkie thank you

786315 Awesome! That's exactly what i wanted to do! Happy that you guys are loving it!

To be honest, i half expected for fluttershy or twilight to stand over pinkies grave with a demonic grin in the end, almost like foreshadowing for a sequel of more cupcakes(with out the cupcakes) btw, is it disturbing that this and the original is makin mecrave cupcakes?

1636669 .... yes actually... to this day i still refuse to eat rainbow cupcakes

Speaking of hearts Dash didn't remove that razor wire from around her heart when she put it back in she's gonna get a lot of heart pain

This was a great story and I nearly shed a tear at the sadness... Nearly

Nice i like the idea of pinkie and pinkamena being two different ponies it makes more sense to why pinkie did those things it was all pinkamena.

1845785 sadly i haven't. something might be wrong with me.

2692144 good to hear

U SHOULD SO MAKE A SEQEUL it could be were pinkie randomly comes o life because god gives her a second chance and she suddenly wakes up infront of her grave and so on

3659962 Oh god... Maybe... This is already a sequal, so a sequal to a sequal... not sure how I'm going to do that xD

3783133 threeqeual!

well, great story, i must say plenty of bloodshed and character depth for dashie & pinkie. well, better get going
"walks off, pocketing a vial of serum"