The "Cupcakes Killer" is still on the loose. And is now being hunted by an old victim.
Okay two things:
1. Her organs were harvested, and her skin ripped from her flesh how does her heart flutter if it's not even there?
2. It is a wall of text, I would recommend splitting that up as soon as you can to prevent hate.
Other then that I really like the idea. Please do go on.
Personally I don't like stories where Dashie dies, yet strangely enough I'm fine with UNdead Dashie. This is interesting.
Proceed good sir. I will be eagerly following.
you need to stop using alot, there are better words who do the same job,alot just sounds ignorant.
So this is a Dead Rainbow Dash fic eh Awesome
[youtube=6c7HVDVbHvQ]
Okay two things:
1. Her organs were harvested, and her skin ripped from her flesh how does her heart flutter if it's not even there?
2. It is a wall of text, I would recommend splitting that up as soon as you can to prevent hate.
Other then that I really like the idea. Please do go on.
Personally I don't like stories where Dashie dies, yet strangely enough I'm fine with UNdead Dashie. This is interesting.
Proceed good sir. I will be eagerly following.
you need to stop using alot, there are better words who do the same job,
alot just sounds ignorant.
So this is a Dead Rainbow Dash fic eh
Awesome
[youtube=6c7HVDVbHvQ]