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I...
What?
What in the hell did I just read.....
Uh...
Wha.
Welp, my brain has been filled with fuck.
needs more >rape
I...um...hmm.
I have to say, it's unexpected how this one turned out. From the first paragraph I thought it was a cheap troll fic. But when I skimmed ahead (against my own better judgement) it looks like you have an actual serious storyline developing here. Characters are quite unlike their canon selves but are consistent and well thought out within this setting. There's some good suspense, and I like that you invoked sympathy for Scootaloo and Sweetie instead of just treating them like generic victims. You might want to fix that first part, though. It's noticeably worse than the rest of the fic.
I will NOT be reading any future installments, but for the type of people who enjoy this sort of content, this is pretty good.
Accidental erection, ABORT MISSION ABORT MISSION!
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>From the first paragraph I thought it was a cheap troll fic
You hit the nail on the head. This started as a troll post on 4chan. But much to my surprise, people liked it enough to ask for more, so I kept delivering. As I continued to write, I started putting more care into what I was doing and developed a plot for an actual short story.
Da Fuq did I just read?
777193 I....I am ashamed. I thoroughly enjoyed that massacre. It was twisted, dark, and quite simply insane. But it was the kind of insanity that one likes, however grudgingly. Excellent job. I will be reading further chapters, if for no reason other than my hopeful side wants a lightening if events.
That was interesting, to say the least.
oh. my. god. so dark. yet so great. please tell me you're working on chap 2 soon
