The Crystal Emperor

by Ekhidna

Slight expansion

As stated, just a small expansion at the beginning of the story, just to make it a bit more complete.

Comments

[The Slending Angel]

Wow... MUCH better. I LOVED it!! You did a great job!

[Coberlink the Rebirth]

Finally I read your story and it was great, but a little sad. It is truly an honor for me your choosest my work for the cover of your story. Especially after knowing you are the author of Spike's Destiny and Desires.

I love those 2 stories and I hope that one of them ends in

Spike's Destiny It inspires me to write my own fic really is a great story.

[Ekhidna]

5298493 Thanks! And,GO FOR IT BROTHER!

[sunsrider]

very, very nice work there... it even gave me some ideas! gonna throw it right on a paper :D

[Johndye]

This song defines this fanfic for me

[PaulAsaran]

You can has review.

[Ekhidna]

5887052 Well, what can I say. I'm in desperate need of an editor (english is my second languague and while I can speak it and understanding perfectly my grammar is pure and utter shit). Also, it was more of an idea that wouldn't leave my mind until I wrote it down. But your review is amazing and has helped me a lot to point my mistakes and learn from them (I seriously hope so, because while not as bad as I was a year ago I still make a LOT of mistakes).

About the Windigoes though, should've explained them. My bad.

Again, thanks for the great review and I hope I can improve in the future for you to truly enjoy one of my stories and when I'm good enough, come back to this story and fix it up.

[PaulAsaran]

5887145
To be honest, I seriously considered not letting you know the review existed, simply because I didn't want to hurt your feelings. I'm glad to see you're taking it so well. Good luck on your future writing endeavors!

[Ekhidna]

5887191 I do not believe in bad reviews (unless those reviews are troll or hateful ones). A review is a review and if it helps someone to work on fixing their weaknesses and mistakes, the better.

[Xaldon Ajide]

Lord Ironfist... Possible Might and Magic reference?

[Ekhidna]

6084027 Caught.

[Xaldon Ajide]

6084966 Which ones did you play? I've done 6-8 and played 1-3 & 5 of the heroes OMM games.

[Ekhidna]

6084993 Only 5 and 6. 6 is my favorite so far.

[Xaldon Ajide]

6085043 8 is so much more fun, you get to have dragons and many of the races usually thought of as bad in your party, including dark elves, Ogers, Minotaurs, heck even vampires and necromancers.

It's a lot of fun.Also you get to see Falagar and Queen Cathrin again.

Also Why is it that I like the majority of your story's.

[Ekhidna]

6085218 Darn, gotta get my hands on 8 right now then!

Who knows? I'm not that good of a writter but I do try to bring a good story nonetheless. Glad you like most of them =D.

[Ekhidna]

6795351 *This is about that new story you wanna write*

Do it my brother, I will be here if you ever need my help, you know it.

As for what side should Spike take.......Why not his own and fight both powers at the same time. One fights for justice while the other fights for darkness. And he fights on the side of Harmony, the very thing everyone thought was broken.

*I do it here because for some reason FimFiction won't let me reply on your blog, page or PM you.

[Starblade]

8178852 I don't know. Are you sure it isn't the other way around? Because you hear stories of "immortal"gods being slain all the time in stories, movies, etc.

Furthermore, "immortal" means not mortal, not liable or subject to death. And "eternal" means lasting or existing forever. In truth, they both sound nearly the same, yet when it comes to the first, someone always seems to find a way around it. For example, in the Dresden Files series, Dresden learns that the night of his birthday (Halloween) is the only night of the year when immortals are vulnerable to death.