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Nice idea, I liked it.
Also, if you would make a full story, based on this fanfic (with or without the sex scenes, I don't really care), I would totally read it.
Faved
The right of another living, sentient creaure to choose for itself is one of the rules upon which our society is based.
This raises questions. Are the stallions delibrately kept stupid? How do they feel about their situation? Do they even have the capacity to comprehend what is happening around them, or are they simply bredding stock without intellect or ability?
Could do without the sex, but this seems to be going in the right direction.
Where the hell have I seen this concept before?
Holy Crap this is amazing.
What happens now?
very similar concept in FoE: Project Hhorizons.
Hmm. This would make a great, dark, dystopic story.
I think you should add more!
507281 I think you are correct!
507281>>507548 a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/w/awwyeahplz.png
Let my people go!
great celestio, LET MY PEOPLE GO!
at first i was like
then i was like
then i was like
then i suddenly became
No firsters for this chapter.
this paradise is not so.
it is a hell where few males are given a chance at true life.
they just exist solely for the purpose of mating.
forced
raped
their very will striped away living them as nothing but pawns to be used as walking penises.
our world is paradise compared to the one you created.
my question: will the trapped escape? will they gain their freedom? will they fight for their right to live as they choose to?
I'm so glad i fav'd this story
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Of course this draws into question why bother having ANY males be free at all. I mean why is Hoity Toity running around designing dresses when he could be giving a mare some sweet luvin' or be plowing some fields.
Either way I'm guessing we'll have 4 more chapters of mane 6 sexiness before shit really starts hitting the fan.
553807 I think this form of reproduction is only in Ponyville, that is why he is running around.
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Interesting idea, however, it seems a little roundabout to try and explain the small stallion to mares ratio as part of a cryogenic vault story line
But besides that small criticism, nice job
I saw the chapter title and squee'd dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowkiss_flip.png
HORSE! POWER! HORSE! POWER! HORSE! POWER! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
behold, hell disguised as paradise.
this story don't give me wood, because its the best grimdark i ever read.
it has porn in it? duh, its a story on why the ratio of vags to dicks are 10-1.
its a story about the darker side of paradise, a story about the price that must be taken to ensure peace.
i fucking love this fucking story
WRONG HOLE dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rarity.png
588145 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
I don't really read it for the porn, I read it for the story. Keep up the awesome work. This has better story than any other clopfics I read (maybe because I don't read).
Awww yeah 69 favorites! Just thought you guys should know.
YES! Good story!
... I have nothing to say... really
i do. i fucking love this story.
its a view into solid hell.
a fake paradise to half of the population.
one question though is celestia behind this hell in anyway?
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Good graces my good sir this is quite the story... although I do have a question...
Are the mares pregnant at the moment or they keep the sample in their labs as they say?
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Well, when the ruler happens to be an immortal FEMALE goddess then yes, she probably had something to do with enslavement of the male population. 5 bits says it's because Discord walked out on their wedding.
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wow.
what a bitch.
good thing humans don't exist in this hell.
um, just so you know, twilight is the hour between the sun setting and the moon rising, not before the dawn its after the sunset. or before the moonrise
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Actually twilight can refer to both the times between dawn and sunrise or sunset and dusk. 
Besides, it was more of a play off the phrase "It's always darkest before the dawn" but that seemed too long for a chapter name.
635497
you could have called it "darkest hour"
[edit] no wait that sounds like a horror film or a war movie
Yes
OK so i have to know this now...how seriously are you taking this story? Is it just intended to be a clop flick or something more. Cause i`ll be beyond pissed off if you end this thing like a troll would. The background story that you have been building up is really really good and i will be disapointed if you fudge it up by giving this story a silly stupid ending.
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I'm completely serious. The story really takes root after the mane six have gone through and I'm considering continuing the story further under a new title to avoid the clop a little. Sorry to those of you who are reading it for that
643221 That is Just music to my ears mate. I'm not that big on the clop fics but your story is just...well so good it send chills down my back out of anticipation and wonder of what will happen next. Also I am now totally against genetic engineering and cloning cause this story is kinda scaring me shitless.
Added a dark tag because for some reason I can't write a multi-chapter story without it turning dark. Something about curbstomping innocent little ponies kinda sends out that vibe...
tracking. nice fic.
thats all there is to say, cant even add an emoticon to this one, its too...uh....idk
nice job
Nevermind the whole freaky situation, the eugenics program, and the post-breeding disabilities of the ponies? It's been dark for awhile, and I can't expect it to get any less.
OK I'm have way through this and i have to ask is the mare that the main six keep interupting Celestia? Cause if it is...well that would be to pradictable
653739 Yeah... it's for the best
I'm pretty sure this is what would happen if Trollestia, Molestia, and Tyrant Celestia were combined into some unholy trinity.
Carry On
you just know the ending would either be really happy or really sad.
either this hell is stopped or it continues
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I agree also the story is getting better and better.
WTF is that black shit???? if I coughed that up I would be terrified
I swear I am like psychic because a few hours ago I had a feeling this new chapter would be coming soon lol
Most definitely peculiar... All that glitters isn't gold it seems...
attached? to their children?
sounds more like she beats herself up for something that happened a long time ago.
her child was probably a mortal and died before her eyes.
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I don't believe that is what is going on here...
FAVOURITE CHAPTER!
Celestia is scary.