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What would you do to bring the one you loved back? Would you risk the safety of everyone just to have those last few moments with them? After a terrible accident, Rainbow Dash finds herself lost in a world with one less friend. It seems the only thing she can do is sulk until Twilight comes across an ancient spell that is rumored to bring back the dead, but only for one week. Is it worth it?

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wow..just wow..
that was a realy strange but emotional story.
props to you dude, that was awesome.:derpyderp2:

This was amazing.

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The mods did it.

...ok I really need to stop reading these before manly tears turn into manly sobbing...

Awesome Story! :pinkiesad2:

a/n (artists note) - ignore the clearly-rushed factor of the pic :twilightblush: better art is soon to come! :derpyderp1::pinkiecrazy::duck::rainbowkiss::yay:

i feel like the word "several" appeared a lot but otherwise a wonderful read.

i have to say im impressed, nice job :fluttershyouch::rainbowderp:

Good job but very sad.:fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritydespair::ajbemused::facehoof::rainbowderp:

This reminds me somehow of "The 7th Sense". Ghosts who only want to leave the world of the living and die. :pinkiesad2:

That is one disturbing cover art.:pinkiecrazy:

That was beautiful, dear sir!

Good show! Jolly good show!

Fantastic. It was like Rainbow Dash went through all five stages of grief in those few moments. I'm sure it wasn't fantastic for her, but maybe, after she gets over the nightmares, it will help her to heal.

Or not. :pinkiecrazy:

How did you do the italics thing? I have tried to do it but I just keep failing at it! Please tell me how! Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

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I know, it gets very irritating when it doesn't copy from Word. :trixieshiftleft: If you notice when you do the I button it gives you the brackets with the "i" in it. All you need to do is make sure whatever you want italicized is between the two phrases. I find it faster to just type it out now i.e. [ i ] "whatever" [ /i ]. Hope that helps! :twilightsmile:

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Thankyou sooo much! It did help! :twilightsmile:

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I forgot to tell you something! :derpytongue2: Thanks to you I finally posted my first chapter of my first story! :pinkiehappy: It's called Pushing The Limit and I would love if you would check it out and tell me how it is! (And if you do, please tell me the honest truth whether you like it or not!) But once again, thankyou soooo much! BTW: I LOVE your stories! I can see you being a fine author one day! :raritywink:

“Oh,” Fluttershy replied, a worried look suddenly coming over her. “Are the squirrels okay?”

Yep, that's about right.

“Will someone shut her up?” Fluttershy spat.

“Yeah sure, as long as it’s okay with Dash.” Fluttershy glanced at her friend in the corner who had remained silent the entire time.

Uhhhhhhh :twilightoops:

Dash awoke the next morning to find tiny white flakes sprinkled about the room. “What are these things?” she asked poking one of the flakes around with her hoof. Upon further investigation she realized they were skin flakes. “What’s happening to her?”

She's decompressing decomposing.

The howling of the wind suddenly stopped and a blinding light took the room. Both Dash and Twilight blinked as they looked around after the light had vanished. The door was still intact and the books were still on the shelves. It was as if nothing had happened. The rainbow pegasus broke down in the center of the room, burying her face in her hooves as sob after sob rattled her body. Twilight walked over, resting a caring hoof on her friend’s shoulder as they both realized their friend was gone for good this time.

Took you d*** long enough.


This felt really rushed. Good concept, though.

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