Added a dark tag because for some reason I can't write a multi-chapter story without it turning dark. Something about curbstomping innocent little ponies kinda sends out that vibe...
Nevermind the whole freaky situation, the eugenics program, and the post-breeding disabilities of the ponies? It's been dark for awhile, and I can't expect it to get any less.
OK I'm have way through this and i have to ask is the mare that the main six keep interupting Celestia? Cause if it is...well that would be to pradictable
Added a dark tag because for some reason I can't write a multi-chapter story without it turning dark. Something about curbstomping innocent little ponies kinda sends out that vibe...
tracking. nice fic.
thats all there is to say, cant even add an emoticon to this one, its too...uh....idk
nice job
Nevermind the whole freaky situation, the eugenics program, and the post-breeding disabilities of the ponies? It's been dark for awhile, and I can't expect it to get any less.
OK I'm have way through this and i have to ask is the mare that the main six keep interupting Celestia? Cause if it is...well that would be to pradictable
653739 Yeah... it's for the best
I'm pretty sure this is what would happen if Trollestia, Molestia, and Tyrant Celestia were combined into some unholy trinity.
Carry On
you just know the ending would either be really happy or really sad.
either this hell is stopped or it continues
654928 I agree also the story is getting better and better.
WTF is that black shit???? if I coughed that up I would be terrified