812565 Very good point and will change. I assumed pitch was a way of describing one side of the color scale in an extreme but I guess it was derived from the tar-like substance pitch that you described. Thanks for the advice.
1174564 I have something written but I'm just not satisfied with it. But at the same time I don't want to wipe it and start over because I put a lot of work into it. I guess it's something I need to get over at some point. I'll start working on it again since you said something though.
...ok i have to say this one did seem a bit rushed but it was good all the same. One last thing though; I thought RD's stalion was a black stallion
kekekeke, this is getting GOOD!
define good. We still have mad Alicorns on the loose!
812565 Very good point and will change. I assumed pitch was a way of describing one side of the color scale in an extreme but I guess it was derived from the tar-like substance pitch that you described. Thanks for the advice.
Yay! next chapter!
I hope you haven't abandoned this fic. The plot is really interesting
1174564 I have something written but I'm just not satisfied with it. But at the same time I don't want to wipe it and start over because I put a lot of work into it. I guess it's something I need to get over at some point. I'll start working on it again since you said something though.