700027 I don't believe that is what is going on here...
Look... Strange voice change in Celestia/ Strange black stuff in her body/ also in her teeth No my friend... she is been controlled by whoever is behind this madness. And I love it! can't wait for more!
I swear if they did something to the cakes, they will suffer!
777611 Sorry about that, got halfway done and then got distracted with work etc. Hopefully I can get it done before this weekend if you don't mind being patient for a little longer.
This is a really interesting story. The content itself is mostly clop, but it actually has a story driving it, as if the sex ISN'T the reason the story was written. Which may be the case. Either way, good read.
One thing though: How can something be "pitch white"? The phrase "pitch black" came because pitch is a really dark black substance, like tar or oil. That would be like saying "as black as snow". Maybe "stark white" would work better? Sorry to be nitpicky, I can get a bit OCD at times.
I swear I am like psychic because a few hours ago I had a feeling this new chapter would be coming soon lol
Most definitely peculiar... All that glitters isn't gold it seems...
attached? to their children?
sounds more like she beats herself up for something that happened a long time ago.
her child was probably a mortal and died before her eyes.
700027 I don't believe that is what is going on here...
Look... Strange voice change in Celestia/ Strange black stuff in her body/ also in her teeth
No my friend... she is been controlled by whoever is behind this madness.
And I love it! can't wait for more!
I swear if they did something to the cakes, they will suffer!
FAVOURITE CHAPTER! Celestia is scary.
A little corruption goes a long way, kekeke!
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eh? someone say something?
Where is the next chapter? its been a while since one was posted
777611 Sorry about that, got halfway done and then got distracted with work etc. Hopefully I can get it done before this weekend if you don't mind being patient for a little longer.
>> Inthend Okay!
This is a really interesting story. The content itself is mostly clop, but it actually has a story driving it, as if the sex ISN'T the reason the story was written. Which may be the case. Either way, good read.
One thing though: How can something be "pitch white"? The phrase "pitch black" came because pitch is a really dark black substance, like tar or oil. That would be like saying "as black as snow". Maybe "stark white" would work better? Sorry to be nitpicky, I can get a bit OCD at times.