i do. i fucking love this story. its a view into solid hell. a fake paradise to half of the population. one question though is celestia behind this hell in anyway?
sage.bloowuff.com/mlp/dignified_luna_madmax_monocle.png Good graces my good sir this is quite the story... although I do have a question... Are the mares pregnant at the moment or they keep the sample in their labs as they say?
Please keep up the good work... also this is kind of a scary story I love it.
629625 Well, when the ruler happens to be an immortal FEMALE goddess then yes, she probably had something to do with enslavement of the male population. 5 bits says it's because Discord walked out on their wedding.
um, just so you know, twilight is the hour between the sun setting and the moon rising, not before the dawn its after the sunset. or before the moonrise
633962 Actually twilight can refer to both the times between dawn and sunrise or sunset and dusk. Besides, it was more of a play off the phrase "It's always darkest before the dawn" but that seemed too long for a chapter name.
OK so i have to know this now...how seriously are you taking this story? Is it just intended to be a clop flick or something more. Cause i`ll be beyond pissed off if you end this thing like a troll would. The background story that you have been building up is really really good and i will be disapointed if you fudge it up by giving this story a silly stupid ending.
641063 I'm completely serious. The story really takes root after the mane six have gone through and I'm considering continuing the story further under a new title to avoid the clop a little. Sorry to those of you who are reading it for that
643221 That is Just music to my ears mate. I'm not that big on the clop fics but your story is just...well so good it send chills down my back out of anticipation and wonder of what will happen next. Also I am now totally against genetic engineering and cloning cause this story is kinda scaring me shitless.
... I have nothing to say... really
i do. i fucking love this story.
its a view into solid hell.
a fake paradise to half of the population.
one question though is celestia behind this hell in anyway?
sage.bloowuff.com/mlp/dignified_luna_madmax_monocle.png
Good graces my good sir this is quite the story... although I do have a question...
Are the mares pregnant at the moment or they keep the sample in their labs as they say?
Please keep up the good work... also this is kind of a scary story I love it.
629625
Well, when the ruler happens to be an immortal FEMALE goddess then yes, she probably had something to do with enslavement of the male population. 5 bits says it's because Discord walked out on their wedding.
631366
wow.
what a bitch.
good thing humans don't exist in this hell.
um, just so you know, twilight is the hour between the sun setting and the moon rising, not before the dawn its after the sunset. or before the moonrise
633962
Actually twilight can refer to both the times between dawn and sunrise or sunset and dusk. Besides, it was more of a play off the phrase "It's always darkest before the dawn" but that seemed too long for a chapter name.
635497
you could have called it "darkest hour"
[edit] no wait that sounds like a horror film or a war movie
Yes
OK so i have to know this now...how seriously are you taking this story? Is it just intended to be a clop flick or something more. Cause i`ll be beyond pissed off if you end this thing like a troll would. The background story that you have been building up is really really good and i will be disapointed if you fudge it up by giving this story a silly stupid ending.
641063
I'm completely serious. The story really takes root after the mane six have gone through and I'm considering continuing the story further under a new title to avoid the clop a little. Sorry to those of you who are reading it for that
643221 That is Just music to my ears mate. I'm not that big on the clop fics but your story is just...well so good it send chills down my back out of anticipation and wonder of what will happen next. Also I am now totally against genetic engineering and cloning cause this story is kinda scaring me shitless.