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Wait no longer, for it is here.
So herding is a thing in this story? Interesting...
All though I do believe that there was a bit too much misanthropy in this chapter. In other chapters it was more balanced to show both the good and bad of humanity.
Nonetheless, thanks for the update and looking forward to more.
~8chill
Brandon + "Nova" + Lyra = Oh my.....
oh my this isn't good. for this chapter i must boop your nose
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stay classy
5483386 I'm trying to make it that this is what they think, there will be other races that believe humans are doing enough but in a sense humans to them are still new.
oh
oh
here we go
If I knew how to implant a Youtube clip, I would use the 'You have fucked up'. Those Diamond dogs have truly, (puts on shades) screwed the pooch.
5485237 yeah well I made it how this is what they think, truly the other races would do the same as well in a sense. There really was no proof at the time that it was being done by one group (until now)
wow now this is how to do a cliff hanger.
who is the mare? and why did the dog's remove her horn?
ware is nova? why did she levee the gala?
just so many questions.
this story is really going places and in a good way.
harts fire.
The dogs kidnap a human right after the conversation of how humans would react to this...
They gun get whooped! Then will follow the fallout. On the plus side, FOUND THE KIDNAPPING VICTIMS!
I just want to say that i disagree with brandon, we actually try to do something to stop these problems and a lot of people help in their ways but sadly is not enough
You cant just generalize, is like saying that all russians are crazy or all the asians are the same
Anyways problem solved, the kidnnaping were the diamond dogs all the time
5492126 oh? Are you really sure that they are the one behind it? How do you not know if say ponies were doing it? Hrm?
We had planned for him to be involved in the kidnappings. Just not this soon and not this way. Surprise!
Let's see if his prediction of the human's reactions proves true, eh?
Keep going! ;)
Aaaand the shitstorm begins!
And now I play the waiting game
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YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
Well, That escalated quickly.
"Ponies being captured? Ah your fine... You say some random human got captured? Someone get me one of the Seal teams. Now damn it!"
Probably not how it's goanna play out, but that's probably what Brandon is going to think considering his stand our human politics. Of course if the politicians sent in the teams now it would be like officially stating that they only care for the humans in Equestria... Quite the shitstorm is indeed on the horizon. No matter how this plays out it's going to end badly.
Story's going good so far, despite the grammar and speeling mistakes. I'm wondering how much longer until we get to the present like in the first chapter. Guess we'll just have to see.
I wood say that the diamond dogs have step in it this time. not only did they kidnapped a human, but a human that has the Princesses eye on him and I think queen chrysalis as well. I look forward to seeing the next chapter on this story. Keep up the good job you are doing. I do hope to see a new chapter soon.
Dragonfox
I really like how you did the princcesses.
And really, I very much dislike how that would be true, another race? They don't really care...
Ohh my, I can just envision the fecal matter hitting the fan if Brandon forms a herd with Chrissy and Lyra. Considering Chrysalis put Lyra under mental compulsion, I do not think Lyra will take it well. Would be interesting to see how Brandon would smooth things out though.
Yeah, no shit, most wildlife is sentient on earth. However, wildlife on earth is not SAPIENT. Equestrian wildlife shows a small degree sapience.
Bullshit, ask a government directly if the Council will not act. The states, Canada, U.K, France, Germany would help if asked, along with many others.. They do it all the time, and I can provide many examples.
I could go on about is Brandons rant, but he has proven his self short sided and impulsive.
<Last Scene> --> Aaaaaaand there goes my interest in this story.
Question: is it worth to continue reading?
<Reads this>
*Sigh*
I think Brandon is exaggerating, humanity had lots of positive sides too, I think he's just yet to see the more negative success of ponies other than the occasional bigot.
I find it funny that ponies preach harmony, but it's the other races, like gryphons, minotaurs and the such are much more open as a whole. I also love that unlike many authors you keep mentioning the other races instead of focusing on just ponies.
Cya
Raziel-chan
6230472 Whelp...take into consideration it is a character's opinion. It may not reflect the author's thoughts.
But...yeah...
Um... Wat?
Is this the way it was meant to be said?
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I belive he was about to say, "cared," Before correcting himself.
im getting tired of this self righteousness and moral high ground speeches. we get it you dont like it but i can bet my car that if he was in any power at all he would find out real fast that he cant do half the stuff he preaches about. its not like the world leaders can just wave there hand and make all the bad things go away.