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The correct response to that is a swift punch to the face
a vary interesting chapter, I kind of figured Nova Star would be a bit jellies with Brandon going to the spa with Lyre.
but do I see something going on in the back ground after all foalnapping's and the humans are not helping. makes me wonder if they are not behind it maybe a little experimenting going on from the purest trying to make a weapon that will make earth so nopony can live there.
that is the only thing I can think of after all the foalnapping, is so spread out.
guess we will have to what for the next installment to see.
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I don´t remember if he had the money, but i expected him to give him money, and i thought he would tell him to not go into the Human world because of those strange foalnapping.
I think that would be my first reaction, but maybe not the best. Good chapter.
Poor Lyra, that feeling you get when you realize there will be no second chance does suck.
Keep going! ;)
I'm loving this story so much. The little filly with cancer had me tearing up.
enjoyable as always
stay classy
5418104 not a punch but a brain force restart
5419426 yeah I had a very dear friend of mine who passed who had cancer, I decided to make this chapter a bit with that mark of the cancer filly because I know the feeling of hoping to beat it.
Grammar is a bit wonky, some sentences just end up not really making any sense as written. The story itself it pretty engaging, though.
5423658 welcome to eragon136666 in a nutshell :D still much more enjoyable hab many, honestly I forgetthere are even spelling issues etc because his writing is in stark contrast to his grammar (which like his actual English skill is actually very good hut it's the basic side which is down). You can tell he's a great writer through it is basically what happens every time.
5421087 If you think about it most kids with cancer fight it for there parents. All the pain and suffering for their parents. There no bigger sacrifice than that. Thats what really hits home for me . I put there sacrifice up there with Jesus. To live in pain like that for someone else happiness and a kid. You can't top that nobody can.
Really great story, I assume Nova is Chrysalis... wonder how that's gonna pan out
Editing helps this a lot, still a little wonky in places but its minor and there is some great writing in there
May I suggest somebody edit the story description too?
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Heh, I'm still working on becoming precise. I do fix most of the problems as I come across them. Chapter 1 still isn't edited because I'm lazy/unfocused. Thanks for giving me a heads up that some things are still wonky though, I'll try to work through that more.
5472209 Yeah I noticed C1 had far more errors but if that is unedited then Eragon's English has improved. When I got to C2 I honestly forgot which author I was reading from lol.
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Oh, all of it is him; I just polish the diamond.
As in, the stuff you see in unedited C1 is his original work, C2+ is just what it looks like with a nice shine on it.
5472217 okay I'm going to admit that comment made my day haha
5472502 ;) your writing is just so recognisable with it being great except the grammar (however some part of your sentences are acuallly far farrr better than most English speakers, honestly it's the very basics that sometimes go wonky and its not even that bad tbh when it does go wrong). And in 2ch suddenly 90℅ of thee mistakes went and in c3 I checked the top quickly reminding myself whose fix I was reading now xD
5473597 well it's good to have a editor who is working on te newest chapter
5473603 mmhm, eagerly awaiting :P
Sadly, not all situations can be solved with words...like someone forcing you to drive somewhere while holding a gun at your head, you can't bet out of that without violence.
*sigh*
it's sad for children so young to get cancer..so innocent and young, room for so much potential.
Gesture made by Lyra is actually a well known one called Kozakiewicz gesture (or wał) after great Polish pole vaultel.
Hey, different strokes for different folks. Although it might be a bit weird if you were dating Rainbow Dash and she found out you were wearing panties with her face on them...
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the cure for cancer is a light, a special light that shines with a frequency that kills signal cell organism. u just set it to the right frequency for the type of cancer and let it shine on u for a bit but u got to do it alot . it cures lots of things but need to be done multiple times for a full cure lol its called the light and they say "walk to the light" as a joke but ya i know of it but ya its based or the rift ( the "i" makes the I noise i think idk how to spell it) machine i forget alot about it but ya i know its there and its been there for many years and even has been improved in recent years but they cant say its a cure for cancer because then they will get sewd and shut down...... and i think its already happened
Oh.. god muh heart. That lil filly is so adorable. Why you do dis author. My tears can only flow so much and my heart can only break to pieces for so long.
The feels.
Hmm, now I'm wondering if the changelings aren't behind those foalnapppings against Chryssie's orders.
Cya
Raziel-chan
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First, saying that is in very poor taste because it trivializes the deaths of all of the people who die from cancer.
Second, you clearly don't understand what cancer is. It's not caused by bacteria (eg. single-celled organisms), it's when something corrupts the DNA in one of your own cells in just the right way that it survives but its decendents ignore the "Ok, you've done your job. Now die." signal from the rest of the body.
The reason curing cancer is so difficult is that cancer cells are identical to other cells in your body except for having lost the plot. The reason chemotherapy makes you sick is that it's based around finding flaws in how cancer cells replicate so quickly and then using poisons that hurt cancer cells faster than they hurt healthy cells because of those flaws. (Last I checked, the most promising new research was into things like blocking the "grow a new blood vessel here" signal so tumors starve)
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some scientist believe cancer can be cured simply by going on a certain diet, due to the way cancer cells work, if you avoid eating certain things, you can, theoretically, 'starve' the corrupted cells.
Though, I don't know why I'm telling you this, kinda off topic, sorta... maybe