Vary good work Eragon13666 I am proud of you.
this is a really good chapter and it shows some back story along with a bit of story building.
exultant work.
Harts Fire

neat

stayclassy

Dark souls i have lost many of hours to that game

Pfft, I can see why the way he spent time with Luna would look suspicious to others.

Good that she at least acknowledged that Chryssie deserves a second chance, but it took much persuading.

Hope to see more Chryssie next chapter.

Cya
Raziel-chan

The primary difference between Brandon's mother and Luna, is that Luna is willing to be reasoned with. Granted she still holds a very strong opinion against Chrysalis, but she doesn't resort to evil backstabbing to ensure her way is made. This is what Brandon must explain to Silver.
Interesting premonition with Fancy Pants. Wonder what it means?
Keep going! ;)

6746909
Actually Luna and Brandon Mother is completly different aspect.
Brandon Mother is racist without any rational sense to that.
Luna was attacked by Chrysalis forces (not physically but counting Canterlot as her 'home')
You can compare this situation to like hobo asking for food you decline and some times later he rob your house. She have pretty much big basics to not trust her. Not giving her second chance looks more like fear and/or stubborness.

6747050 right, exactly. In that example, Luna would be willing to keep an eye on the hobo but not interfere, while B's mother would simply shoot him and not even think of asking questions.

some stuff in that comment isn´t really because of this story, but only because I was somehow remembered about bad examples.

a part of me still thinks that it is sad, that it has to be some sort of herd story, because I would really like the wa you write the romance for a normal partnership, but the story is good enough, so I don´t feel like I would need to stop only because of that.

“You name is…Candy right?”

Could it be that this story had my not so favourite Cheese X Pinkie shipping?
Okay now I know at least she wasn´t her daughter, I remember at least that much

The room was rather still, no a voice was heard before, my cheeks puffed a bit, and I started to laugh, loud, and hard.

Yes I had to laugh too, but that would be actually a herd partner I could live with.

“Because well…”
“We stayed up all night Celestia…no sex what so ever.”

I can´t deny I got a mental cinema after that.

You are young, in human years, but even ponies and other races were may outlive you, ponies on their own, could live, decades after they turn one hundred

I don´t exactly understand why some people want to make them that much older actually, or where that is comming from. The first time I had read it in a certain story, it was a bit depressing to read about the Human dying uch earlier than his special somepony, and the story tried to make us feel that too.

6747050
I haven´t thought that much about it, but I agree with both of you.

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The chapter was much better than I thought it would be, not sure why, but I´m a bit wary about everything at the moment.

6747595 are you calling Brandon wuifu a hobo? Haha I'm kidding

6747793 well actually, for a time, yes!

6747793
More like hobo with shotgun!

6747821 as Brandon would say "dear bloody God

I can't help but say that this was a really good chapter. I am looking forward to the next one. I just wish it did not take so long for you to write new chapters. Keep up the good work.

Dragonfox

6750270 the reason this one took so long was because of work and I was in a deep depression

6746909 well it's really his wife who been bugging poor old Brandon on doing that modelling thing, mostly its to bug him until he at last agree (to which he did) to do with her. It won't happen soon (chapter wise) but will happen

6746752 I lost many years to that game

Why doesn't this story have a dark tag?

6764657 never really thought of that, you think this story should have a Dark tag?

No, I'm caught up and have to wait! Dammit! Oh well, great story. Definitely could use some editing though. Not picking on you for it, just pointing out. If you need an editor, let me know.

shoot, kill, death, destroy…swag.

Is that a reference to the .mov series?