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Chryssysecksuns best secksuns.

Oh i like that, for a moment i was scared, that they would to together to fast again, or that she would use her (Changeling Powers), but i am glad that nothing of this happend.

This is one of those storys, which i never really know if i can like everything about it or not (i can´t explain it better), but i can say that everything till now was really good and if there are two or three chapters more like this, i think that it would be safe to take this story into my favourite once.

I would really like it to see if she shows him who she really is, i mean i am pretty sure that she has to be the one that is Chrysalis, but i don´t remember any hints and i would like to see that he shows her that he really only cares about her personality.

We have our own thoughts on who these "assassins" are, we'll see if they are really them. ;)
I liked how Nova skirted the issue of not actually having a room, but then how did she obtain her dress? Hmmm...
Keep going! ;)

5374497 yeah don't worry I won't be making them a couple too quickly maybe in a few more chapters I will because really I don't wanna be one of those writers who make two people a couple right on chapter 2

well this is a treat thx

stay classy

Why does this story have so many dislikes?
I constantly see stories with completely lame and un-original stories getting upvoted und featured, especially stories with overpowered characters "good always wins with no losses"-plots and "ponies are better than humans" (can win every fight against us, are socially better, etc...)...

That being said, I love your story. Finally something new around here that isn't the same plot wrapped up in a slightly altered design

I really like the main character for his problems (like his first love affair not working out(makes him seem more realistic)) and the presentation of the other humans he met or heard about.

5379404 well thank you for the time to make a comment such as this, made my day, heck it always makes my day when someone leaves a comment.

And to say how many dislikes and such, I think 10 (how it is now as I write) is a good number for me. I mean sure not everyone will like my story and realy this is the best story so far. (Howbi think) that I have made so far.

And I get what you mean about the 'hero' of the story always winning. I always hated that, I plan to later on add more lost for our human Brandon. (I will not make him op)

Anyway I'm gald you are enjoying this!

not sure how but I missed the last too up dates to this story.
I really like this story it is moving so nicely it just flows, the romance is developing vary nicely I can see this story running for many more chapters.
I am betting once nova finally comes clean to Brandon things will be just fine a bit shocking but really good after that.
harts fire

5401340 well I'm gald you are liking this story, truthfully the flow is good because this story is very planed out, my other stories I just wrote to have this one is more planned. As I guess it shows.

I am happy to see Queen Chrysalis used in a good way it is vary rare to see it and as a love interested is even beater.

5403898 yeah and that's what brought me into making this story, as you can no doubt see this is part of a diffrent universe (duh) and im going about the law saying that my all universes are the same. And beside o ways considered some of the bad guys to just be misunderstood.

Nightmare moon just wanted everyone to love her nights just went at it the wrong way

And I always considered as Chrysilis as a ruler trying to save her subjects. I mean think of it, if celstisa was pushed to the point of needing to save her subjects she would do the same

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Nightmare moon just wanted everyone to love her nights just went at it the wrong way

And I always considered as Chrysilis as a ruler trying to save her subjects. I mean think of it, if celstisa was pushed to the point of needing to save her subjects she would do the same
if there was any pony I was able to spend time with I would have a vary hard choice. lira hart strings I really like but I think in the long run it would be Nightmare moon just something about her she just needs a hug if you know what I mean, she is just so sexy.
also I agree 100% about Chrysalis she did what was needed for her entire race to survive.
hears hoping you can have this story around for several more chapters.
harts fire

5405333 i plan on making this story as long as possible I don't wanna drag utmost but o also don't wanan makent short

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I like Luna's and Nightmare Moon's character's the most, so They are really the only ones I would date.
cadance seems fun to be around though.
celestia...eh she needs to show her true self more, then she'll most likely be good to be around.

I'm just rambling here.

Mmmmm. A certain changeling Queen seems to have been smitten.

Cya
Raziel-chan

is it really that strange to think you just developed stigma about humane relationship when 100% have gone up in flames? then the fact that 100% of non humane relationships have worked out quite well? thats not strange or special in any way thats just your brain putting 2 and 2 together after being scared from past events.