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hah people underestimate kids so much.
I have noticed the frustration of yours by all the ether's that should be either's, as ether is something completely different from what you actually intend to say. Either way this is not too bad of a chapter, a set back? Yes ... but not too bad of a chapter.
ok well that little bombshell is out in the open now and that is just a little hint of what is to come.
after several days of eragon13666 having a harebell case of bran freeze and hours of Skype time I can let you all in on a secret this story is going to be going down a hole different road in the next several chapters.
all the clues are in the past chapters.
the little details are still in the works but the mane body of the story is laid out now it is just a matter of getting the story down on paper.
I can say with eragons13666 pc being a older model and wounded it is only a matter of time till he will be off line till it can be repaired or replaced.
Harts Fire
he's a kid so that only make's sense
stayclassy
kids, gotta love 'em
got to love kids
use google docs to write, will save you a lot of trouble
There was some misspelled words on the story. Still love the story tho
i know that problem.
I won´t lie to you, i don´t remember what Celestia said other, that that he could stay with Brandon, and Chrysalis, but everytime i get the feeling that they are about to adopt him sooner or later.
Dr. Quill, i don´t know if it is an OC, or a fanchar, but this could be the first Doctor i really like.
It was her first job right?, so i don´t know if she was somehow nervous, but she doesn´t seemed to be.....to much Doctor, i mean she seems to mean what she said, and she probably takes him seriously.
I hope she knows when she need to stop, and doesn´t try to force the answers out of him, i really like her till now.
you said the chapter was short right?, still much longer than most of the other chapters that are updated in other storys, the new tide seems to be chapters with 800 words, or even less.
6049442 I understand that you don't want to sound rude and don't worry you are not, I've tried in the pass to put the story on a time line when I should update and such and it didn't go well, the chapter that I just got done (if you didn't read it yet) took far too long simply because of life kicking me in the pants, and with all the other little things that had happened with my computer.
Perhaps some day after the story starts to get more and more flow like yes I could put it on a time line like there should be one every two weeks or so. But I don't wanna make promises that won't be in my control of something happened.
I just write simply to write, it gets me away from the real world for only a moment. I find if I start making deadlines I start to not want to write because then it seems like a job to me and not a pass time.
Just know that I promise at least one chapter a month at least (don't worry I plan on doing more but this is a promise I will keep)
Haha, no fear! I bet that's a nice stress relief.
We'll admit, I completely forgot why Fancy wanted him to see a therapist, was it just because "you aren't acting like someone who's faced this kind of trauma should"?
6116205 the only time you should think about doing a release schedule is when you have chapters stacked up and ready to go. Otherwise you start calling them deadlines, and that makes it sound like obligation, and obligations are rarely fun..... Illuminate confirmed? No, not Illuminati, there's no conspiracy to good work!
Keep going! ;)
6116477 the reason he did go was something that had yet to happen in the story, one of the reason is because of his mother and his relationship. Seeing how yes I'm the background Brandon had told fancy of his mother.
I'm making fancy pants in this story the type of friend that would be worried for him because really and it hasn't been shown yet, but Brando. Is, or I should say is suffering on the inside I have yet to show it fully yet.
6116529 we knew he was pretty good friends with Fancy, didn't make that connection though. Nifty!
6116698 trust me, there a lot of wtf moments coming
6118319 nice. So do you want to be a cop or something
6118333
Was thinking about it when I was younger, but joined the Army ROTC program instead. Out now, and am trying to finish up my degree.
6122509 cool! What degree?
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BA in Business, with a double emphasis (marketing and Entrepreneurship), and a minor in Computer Science. Just one last class and I'm done, but it's the second hardest course in the CS track and is only offered in the Spring.
6122578 sweet. I, myself, am taking a trade in account.
6114303 Dr Quill is a OC I made. After ranking through my mind on what I think a doctor should be toward Brandon and to why he is there, I came to the thought of my family doctor and how she is. Pretty much to the point and not one of those "I'm the doctor so take these pills and be happy" type.
As for the adoption of Silver Arrow it is rather soon to be thinking of something such as that yes? I mean they seem to be gold together but Brandon too is also young, perhaps a bit too young to be caring for a child at such a age?
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Well i like that you are realistic, i think i just got used to the fact, that everything happens so fast in most of the storys on fimfiction.
6156792 I've noticed that myself, on how many stories and such seem to go rather face pace into something, marriages, adoption or having kids, I know what you mean about some having it a bit face pace.
That's why some kid these chapters take so long and also because I was working out a timeline with a friend or two about the story. The time line is now done and all that is needed is for me to write it down.
Maybe one day he will adopt Silver Arrow as his own son or just as a Older brother for him. But right now he is just making sure that Silver is well cared for. Remember in the story Brandon's own father was never around. And he feels the need to help Silver because he sees himself in his shoes (or hooves in this case)
6111947 well I think we all would be in a sate of awed if we saw a changeling change before us? I know I be saying I a Jhonny Test way of Coooooool
6181596 well, WE (as in us bronies and possibly some populations of humanity) would. Most ponies however...maaaaybe not so much . Mostly due to misunderstandings and lack of knowledge as to dear Chrissy's motives and such. of course that's for you to determine, it is your story after all; and a good story it is.
6182203 believe me when i say this, I have a few friends helping me with this story and the time line for this story is done it's just up to me to write it all down.
There will be many twists and turns, many doors opened that hadn't been opened in many years.
And it all started from a love of a changeling and a human.
Just read through this thing. It's rife with grammar and spelling errors. SO much so that it's almost not worth reading. But, there's a core story there that makes it worth it to trudge through all of that. The interactions are more or less genuine and you have character development. This story looks like it's on the right path. There are a few cliche's here and there, but nothing so glaring that it's detrimental. In fact, the main cliche' (angst against the human race) is something you addressed within your story itself. So, props for that! I'm looking forward to reading what you have in store for the next chapter.
6313707 grammar and spelling is not my strong suit that much I know. I am happy that you can see that there still is a great story, and we're able to go through it even because of that. I hope you enjoy furture chapters to come.
Hahaha, that kid's awesome!
And yay, a named gryphon!
Cya
Raziel-chan