Page generated in 0.051 seconds
Total duration
1,048 users online
1,837,472 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
oops
6366662 shit just got real
NOT THE CLIFF HANGER.NOOOOOOOOOO
6366816 sorry I had to do this...now here a question, is he dead or not?
after reading the last chapter this song popes up in my head.
Fun little fact that doesn't get brought up often enough in stories here: Discord is, in fact, an absolute idiot. His whole shtick is ultimately completely self-defeating, because of a little fact that most people are not aware of: it just so happens that absolute chaos and absolute order, when taken to their logical extreme, are completely indistinguishable from each other. Physically so, in fact, as a matter of both logic and actual natural law.
Absolute "order," in phyisical terms, means that the closed system that is the universe is maximally structured. Everything is exactly as orderly as it can possibly be and has the highest degree of complexity conceivable. Any actual change would intrinsically have to make it less so. In addition, all potential energy is bound up in an inaccessible form already and cannot even actually be used to effect any further change. This doesn't necessarily mean that nothing moves, it just means that nothing new can ever actually happen. It's the embodiment of determinism.
Absolute chaos, on the other hand, means that the universe is minimally structured. Any and all orderly structures have been broken down and the potential energy bound up within them reduced to the lowest quality conceivable, making it incapable of performing any actual work even though it is technically freely available. Where the orderly universe is a monolith, the chaotic universe is atomic in the original Greek sense of the word - the only thing that still exists is the smallest possible, no longer divisible physical quantum.
In our universe's case, that would be either the so-called "superstrings" or, alternatively, a singularity that is more or less point-shaped: it has no volume or size, just a location. Each and every one of them is moving randomly, independently from the rest, without any internal or external structure to give it any impetus. Any interaction is guaranteed to be countered by an equal and opposite reaction though the sheer chaotic movement of the rest of the system - if there are even any actual laws of nature left, instead of breaking down together with the rest of the natural order.
One way or the other, what you get is an endless, roiling void, homogenously composed of effectively nothing and capable of doing nothing - and therefore also fundamentally changeless.
Long story short, the moment Discord wins? He loses. The ability to affect intentional change is a structured kind of thing - existing as a living, thinking thing isn't compatible with real, pure chaos. As such, your Discord is actually one of the smarter ones, even though it sounds as if he is going against his own stated goals. You can't do fun random monkeycheese bullshit if there is no "you" left to do it.
Wow Luna, very rash and impulsive indeed. Has not your gaming taught you how to properly handle hostage situations?
Sounds like another hive is gearing up for another invasion, but to what end?
6366830 we say he's badly injured, but not dead. He took an approximately level 133 persuasive magical blast, but the most serious injury will probably be the concussion....
Keep going! ;)
6367037 here a food for thought though, Luna is a alicorn and she just blasted Brandon by mistake with alicorn Magic, very powerful, let's say he does live (cause we all know he will) the question is though...why, and how?
6367032 my brain passed gassed when reading this, mind blown
6367039 ah see, that requires speculation of the engineering of this AU. There are quite a few possible branches, but my current favorite is that Brandon's Harmony is synced well enough to Equs that such an attack isn't really effective. Honestly, I forget whether this AU specifies magic affects on humans (I think it was potential "allergic" reaction in certain humans, of which Brandon is actually the opposite), so it can't be ruled out that he might be mostly immune. There's also the possibility of a weak form of love shield he instinctually managed to cast...
Which one (or none), is up the thee, dear author!
6367048 you have indeed thought this out really well to come to this so I will give a small detail of this AU and hopefully other readers will see this.
Brandon body is able to ether expel magical forces that are used to harm, not fully but enough that it can be known as a shield in some ways. However with magic used for healing his body easily 'sucks' this in. When his arm was broken, the princesses had to re break his arm because the bone free back far too quickly and came out wrong. Simply because his body absorbed the magic.
To also say this, Brandon did not use magic at all to make a shield or anything of the nature. But there is a reason why his body is the way it is, which will be told in later chapters.
Brandon is not the only human that is like this ether. In the story I made it out that a small percentage can only come to equis and vice versa for ponies, or any other races that want to come through. And for humans having magic, who knows maybe there are human mages right now and we do not know.
This story is not even close to being down, and the outcome for everything and even the next chapter may shock many.
6367056 oh, we know it's not done yet, we have approximately six open conflicts active at the moment! Better not slap a "complete" flag on this!
6367060 maybe I should, do a little Attack on Titan tease like when thier main character thought to be dead haha
6367063 not the most evil thing, but you're warming up!
6367067 kill him off chrysilis kill Luna and enslaves all ponies because she lost her first real love and made silver a pet how about that for evil?
6367071 don't you dare!
oh this just got complicated
stayclassy
a vary good chapter this came out better then planed impressive.
as to the story well we will talk on TeamSpeek later.
to any one here that would like to chat with eragon13666 feel free to join us on TS. the information for it is in my blog.
I can not comment to the story line as I helped put to gather the bible for this story.
I will say you are all in for a bumpy ride there may be death on a large scale there will be more clop there will be more love, there will be secrets reveled, and much more.
Harts Fire
PS I am a huge diablo gamer on the pc that is and I have a brony clan on there.
6367071 a little more evil, I would agree.
What about killing him off, Chrysalis absorbs his soul and uses his essence to birth a hybrid that has his memories (locked), later which she falls back in love (romantically) with him (as her son, now mate)?
6367843 a Intresting idea that's for sure
6367120 Tis only a joke I would never do that haha
Luna - ace cock block
I admit i don´t like herd storys that much, if they are to big, because I fail to believe, that they can love each other the same way, but two or three ponys are mostly okay.
Okay which one was it that was interessted in him?, i don´t remember everything .
Not sure where i heard that herd thing again, but somehow I don´t want Lyra to just join them again, not sure how much they talked about it already, but i somehow want Lyra to continue as his good friend, I mean they both still like each other, but both of them have new Marefriends is that right?, I´m not sure about Lyra anymore, but I remember Bon Bon being a Changeling.
I just read that he has feelings for Pinkie too? I remember something sad/sweet in that dream, and that Pinkie is probably really much in love, but a bit sad that she can´t have him, however not sure if that is right.
I got used to herd storys a bit more, but this one doesn´t really make me wish for it at the moment.
Somehow inviting Pinkie into a herd, is an interessting, and possible sweet thought for me, but it depens on the way you would write Pinkie Pie being in love.
It could be that I don´t like Lyra to join again to fast, and without trouble, because she denied her feelings that often, only because she thought (forgot his name) he would need his mother more than her.
If Chrysalis, and Lyra should have talked about it, then i hope he doesn´t just accept it the moment they maybe make that offer, but that we have him deny it at first, because......well, I believe I would think it would be a bit weird, if someone would say no all the time after I maybe tried to be together with her, then I would get over it, and suddenly she comes back saying she have decided to be together with me.
I think i want her to work for it, and that Chrysalis is only trying to do that for our Hero, and not because she maybe suddenly like her.
Like i said, i don´t remember everything, because of that i am a bit carefull.
It is still weird to remember Blueblodd raping his mother, it must have been really disgusting for her, however i am more suprised about the fact, that a story can actually make me that angry about it.
Is this another chase of " I have decided to make him an Alicorn, but i just do it later, and don´t tell anyone about it, or ask him if he want´s that?"
I just can´t think of a possible reason for her mystery.
Nice story, it has it´s part, where I was a bit worried about what it could mean later, because i don´t remember everything, but nearly everything was pretty nice, I think I liked the start the most
6370823 hey just read your comments and will say the following.
Pinkie and Brandon ship will not happen there was nothing in the story to say that the two had feelings.
There will be no alicorn transformation whatsoever. I will not be making it as such so do not worry.
There will be a herd, but not like "oh we like him so let's join" only chrysilis and two others will join, but they will have good reasons and it will be built up. But who, well that is up to you isn't it?
6371093 Well i guess it is alright that way, while i didn´t really started this story for a possivle herd feature, i think i can like it, as long as they have good reasons as you said it.
Herd storys that are a bit overdone, like if they have 30 members, i don´t like because i really think they can´t like each other like real lovers, but i guess two more are something that i currently get used to.
Not sure if i understand how you mean it, but it sounds like we could vote for a second member or even both new herd members.
Well the meeting between Chrysalis, and Lyra, and the fact that she didn´t wanted to tell him anything, got me think like Chrysalis actually already thought about starting a herd with him, and her. Since i didn´t remember her liking Lyra, i didn´t liked the idea, that they just decided to create a herd, behind his back, and later they would probably demand it if you know how i mean it.
I think i really just don´t like the idea of him doesn´t having a choice in the matter, or that they talk about everything behind his back, and stuff like that, i just had bad examples of other storys. Actually it is like you said it, they should not do it, just because they want to do it, and i prefer it if it isn´t the only form of relationship the ponys know, just a small detail.
Now i have a different question, i don´t really believe in it, but i like to think it isn´t impossible.
Do you believe that they have more Stallions in mlp than they actually show? I just think it could be possible that well somewhere it is exactly the opposite, a town like the one with Starlight Glimmer, only that they have more Stallions, that we don´t see much, doesn´t have to mean that there aren´t more of them right? I don´t want to destoy any fantasy, but i don´t know if it is really a rule of the show, or just something the fandom really believes in.
This chapter is good but I have one thing to say,
How dare.....How dare you.....HOW....DARE....YOU!!! You have left us all with that cliffhanger, you have not only anger the gods but as well as the whole Celestial order. We demand another chapter post haste or we shall send one of our ranks to turn all of your world's clouds into cotton candy, your ground into peppermint and your waters into some sort of undrinkable substance like chocolate pudding, porridge or even then most vile substance of all....green jello!!! Your world will got mad I tell you MAD!!! *laughing manically* *a sound of a chair smashing on someone and a thump is heard*
Eh hem sorry about that he's kinda on a sugar rush and well lets just forget that idiot and let me say on behave of all the others keep up the good work and we'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. Now if you can excuse me I have to teach someone how to be nice to others.
it may just be me but it feels a bit less like an intimate relationship the more 'herding' there is. The main character's time seems similar to a juggling act divided between all characters invloved and the plot elements that move the story along. Again, this is just personal preference so don't change the story on my account, I REALLY enjoy it as it is. I just felt compelled by the annoying, argumentative side of me to put my two pennies in the suggestion/to-be-forgotten-comments box.
Once again though, its a good story and I am already pumped for the next chapter to come out.
6383867 I understand your thought of this and the first draft of this story was just gonna be short like the chapters we have no, tha was gonna be how long the story was going to be at first, I am working with others who have given me ideas to make the story longer and yes herding seems to be where this story is going for but there is a reason for that which will
Be seen in later chapters.
6383867
6372685
6371757
6367843
6367253
6367062
6367032
I will let all the readers in on a little something. the story is still building up, there is going to be a few changes coming out in chapters and then it will be getting in to some real action.
so to every one hang on the ride may get a little bumpy.
Harts Fire
We commend your skills in the art of immersing readers in the written word. Well done good sir
6394797 trust me I'm sure he would love to do the same to blue balls
6371757 sorry for taking so long to get back I saw the comment in stallions mlp character and forgot to put in my two cent.
I believe that yes outside of the main show there are more stallions that they are letting on, it just that it seems, and many theroy seem to back this up, that the female sex birth right is much higher, not sure why and I won't get into it. It's one of the reasons why I'm
Trying to add more male characters such as Silver Arrow into the mix, but also keeping the fact that many jobs are help bu females as well.
Some had said that yes even though the pony race female is high doesn't mean the other races are, it seemed that dragons have a higher male count and gryphons are kinda equal.
6374636 as Brandon would say 'nope'
just a little heads up for the readers.
eragon is having a bit of a righters block give him your support and wish him well he will return.
6439703 I can live with it, it is enough for me to know that I know another one that thinks that way.
Well like I probably said, i start to get used to it a bit, but usualy I can´t believe that this kind of relationship would work, and since they are not just animals, I can´t truly believe that they are okay to be the third wheel, or something like that.
However everyone that likes it, is allowed to like it, it is just not my favourite kind of relationship.
I think I was alarmed because of Chrysalis, and Lyra right?, but I believe you already said, that they won´t just join the herd that easy.
dd this meant, that we can vote for one, or two other ponys?
I remembered what i was concerned about, somehow I didn´t liked the idea, that Chrysalis maybe talked about that herd stuff with Lyra (i don´t know), and didn´t talked with Brandon first, I mean about the fact if he maybe knew that kind of relationship, or if he could image himself to do it if it should happen. I think i just had read some weird relationship in the past, where the Human never had a real choice in such a matter.
Not sure if this form of a relationship is normal in this universe, but I think i would like it, if this would even be something rare for the ponys, maybe this was something they had to do in the past.
6439816 when k said "that's up do you
To decide" for te herd what I meant is, who do you think it is, the two other memebers has already been chosen so
There that and yes herding is not as common as it once was in that world but stl seen time to time.
And the chrysilis Lyra talk, I'll tell you this it wasn't about a talk of herding and that's all I'll say on the matter
Should've played more Rainbow Six, Luna.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Ohhh... I think I know what's going on.
Omg the feels!!!1!1