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Great chapter. and yes Blueblood got what he deserved.
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No, he got a light slap compared to what he should have gotten. Then again, I'm a particularly vindictive bastard when it comes to harming kids, as well as abusing one's authority (especially when that crime is compounded by rape, torture, and/or murder). He deserves to be hung, drawn, and quartered, nothing less.
i gotta say i love this story another great chapter
stayclassy
Blue Blood got banned! Woot! Honestly didn't have too much hope for him based on your portrayal, but at least that part is over.
Perceptive little tike, that will make things simultaneously interesting and a bit easier...
Keep going! ;)
Hmm.. Silver didn't freak out upon seeing Chrysalis. Why am I getting a 'he be part changling' vibe
Little Silver is a trooper. I can't believe Blue Blood made something so nice being such an ass o3o/
Huh maybe everyone knew that Chrysalis is Nova Star xD
This should be of help.http://www.grammar.cl/Notes/Adjectives_ED_ING.htm
5967739 eeyup I agree with you on that one. He needed more punishment. How being gelded that would work.
a vary interesting chapter. lots to think about.
my hart really goes out to silver, as to silver seeing Chrysalis he saw her but did not see her he is just plan wiped out after the day he hade more or less running on remote control. or was he?
as to the chapter being unedited I only found a few thing to be touched up.
I may give you a hand with it. or maybe not time will tell.
Harts Fire
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That would just give him more reason to go wild. He wouldn't have to worry about any "sown oats" sprouting. There is nothing left to salvage from Blueblood. He will never be able to contribute to society in any meaningful way, in comparison to how much effort it would take to rehabilitate him. Looking at things amorally, death would be the best benefit for Equestria, as keeping him alive requires a drain on resources without any kind of return on the investment. Celestia royally screwed up, and through her own bungling, ensured that he would never be of any worth.
Something I also forgot to mention, my respect for Celestia plummeted after hearing that she covered up after the bastards criminal conduct. There is no good reason for that. She should have come down hard on that when it first showed up (because rare is it that someone is punished for abusing their authority the first time, and it's even more rare for them to have done it only once) and maybe Blueblood could have been salvaged. Instead, she let it go unchecked and is partially responsible for multiple rapes and what Silver had to go through (by that, I mean all things related to Blueblood; though you could argue that Celestia is also responsible for everything, since if Blueblood hadn't raped Silver's mother, he wouldn't have been around to have been captured and so on).
very nice that fancy pants didn´t just convinced him to forgive his mother, but that he gave him an other option.
oooohhhhh yes, that Bluebloos makes me really angry.
5968704 i would agree with you, but maybe not with this punishment, they could only allow him to sleep with ugly Stallions or something, him being the bottom.
I somehow liked that Celestia noticed she had done something wrong till now, and that he can at least do nothing at the moment, but in the most storys he isn´t punished enough.
However, this time he has done something really bad, even i get really angry at him for just reading about it, and i would agree that he should be not allowed to have any female servants anymore or something like that, and i would like it if Celestia would not give him his full power back, without a very good proof he has changed a lot.
I would like it if theyy adopt him, or another child, maybe even a Batpony.
I could just be a Bonus chapter (alternate or not), but i would like it if Celestia would maybe find out about Chrysalis if her, and Brandon are having some fun or in another weird situation. It doesn´t have to be canon, but i would like such a chapter.
5968836 i am not sure if i understood that right, but it looked like Celestia would have covered up a few chases, where he already raped a few Ponys. It would be nice if she would at least stand up for it, i mean if she would admit it if the press should ask abou it or something, but i guess this would maybe not work that easy.
5969466 this would be the only case blue blood use force on a mare, he wouldn't have done this to others.
As to why she pull this under the rug well I'm sure on furture chapters we shall find out huh?
5968429 nope try agene
5969473 i am okay with that, but still thank you for giving me that answer.
"I found you first, came to you first, so by rights, I owned you." A really awkward way of saying I have Dibbs.
I agree with Fancy Pants, Brandon would really regret striking Blueblood. Blueblood has enough clout being nobility to have charges brought against Brandon, especially since they are legitimate. Assaulting nobility would definitely get him banished. Even if all the nobility hated Blueblood's guts they would see it as an attack against all nobility and insist that Brandon be prosecuted. And lets face it, Blueblood probably has plenty of support in the nobles seeing there are a tons of sycophants in Canterlot.
Things just got interesting with silver. Does he have some changeling heritage? Would make sense if his mother told Silver he had a changeling ancestor and that they are not the monsters they are portrayed to be. Guess we will find out in later chapters.
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Be kinda hard since Bon-Bon is or was Nova Star untill a month or so ago. (Forgot the timeline but the day after Brandon arrived in Equestria).
5970908 Bon Bon was nova star when Brandon first met her, she was only nova star for that one visit, the next time Brandon met 'nova' it was chrysiis from then on
ok eragon13666 may be made at me but for the last time Silver Arrow is a pony he does not have any changeling heritage. or does he.
eragon13666 is the only one that knows for sure and he is not telling.
your work eragon13666.
Harts Fire
5968429 nope not part changeling try again little mew
5972736 Aww, oh well that would of been one heck of a twist. Silver's mom turned out being a changling, but I'm still having having a feeling something is up so I shall continue to ponder on this.
5973033 I'll tell you this, the reason of very...very simple
5973035 I swear Im going to pull my hair out if it was simply that he was tired XD
5973046 *only smiles and says nothing* you believe whatever you want to mew
5973052 Hmm.. Oh well, a good story will always keep the readers guessing. We will find out in due time
Harts Fire is just sitting hear on my soft and fluffy cloud watching,
I am enjoying the on going chat.
I may be grinning behind my hoof just a little bit.
Mew eragon13666 can not give you more of a hint with out just telling you out right.
Getting better and better, but and now a cliffhanger... god damn it xD
I love this story thus far, but I have a few concerns. I can oversee them though except for one: The grammar. I noticed that their are MANY grammar errors. And I do understand that it isn't the that easy to edit a chapter, but it seemed to me that their were more errors on the unedited version then the edited. It's a great story, and I enjoy it very much so, but It's really hard to read through with all these grammatical errors.
If you need any help Editing I would be glad to help, just send me a PM. This story would be x10 better with less errors.
Better deal than he'd get back on Earth. They make you pay for the sessions you miss here. Fair enough, of course, because those are fixed appointments and all, but still.
just a little something I have found out and about on the net.
I think all here will enjoy these vids.
im sorry if his comes across as rude, i know many dont like these but, is there going to be a somewhat schedule for releasing the chapters or are they going to be random?
and is the next one soon?
sorry i like to keep track and have a stable reading schedule for all the stories i follow/fav
6071714 I should really start looking up the law system now for this story
Punching BlueBlood in the face? I would have strangled him right there in the shop after ripping his dick off and shoving it down his throat.
Wow, Blue Blood is a real bastard in this fic.
Huh... I wonder why Silver is so chill about Chryssie.
Cya
Raziel-chan
As someone who sees a psychiatrist on a regular basis, you'd be surprised.