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Oookk? What is THAT all about at the end there!?!
Well that happened hm Blue blood not an ass that's new
*TILT* This does not compute...
DonnE.exe has frozen from confusion. Please wait for the system to respond.
6808914 *softly pokes side of head hoping that the DonnE.EXE is not broken.*
6808722 gonna have to find out in the next chapter!
.......... The fuck just happen at the end there!?
There is a lot of small spelling errors or missing sylabes, like
Just reread your own chapter because they are eyesore and ease to catch when you fix it instantly ;p
6809046 blue blood said heeeeeeeeey
6809125 ........ Bro, sending out the wrong signels. Like, seriously, don't fucking do that to me. Ever!
O this is a really good chapter and the cliffhanger is prefect you did a super good job with this chapter eragon 13666.
I'm aware
The is a huge difference in Brandon's mom's attacks and Luna's attack. Brandon's mom did what she did out of hate. Luna's attack was done to protect Brandon based on prior experience in what Chrysalis had done. Luna literally could not take Brandon at his word since Chrysalis has a reputation of messing with people's heads.
Brandon is so messed up. This fic has gotten better and better as Brandon has worked through his issues becoming a better man. Still has some anger issues though.
I would like to see in this fic a peace treaty made between Equestria and Chrysalis. Untill then, they are technically still at war. Luna is actually being remiss in her duties in not apprehending the changeling queen.
Another chapter, awesome. Always love a good story where things go good for Chryssie.
Still errors here and there, but the story is good enough to make me overlook them.
Wow, Brandon's mom is a bitch. Unless it's that guy who answered the phone that messaged Brandon without telling his mom.
Nice to see Linda slowly warming up to Chryssie. I suppose even she realised that the facts that she was willing to call her to help her find Brandon meant just how much she cares for him.
Cya
Raziel-chan
that ending though
stayclassy
Huh, has Blueblood turned? Maybe his punishment has been effective after all! Here's to hoping!
Luna and Chrysalis seem to be getting more than minimally cordial to each other, if Chryssy is snarking at Luna and she's not blowing up, we think they're making great progress over this bonding experience!
Keep going! ;)
6809001
*Run's up and salutes*
"He hasn't responded for 8 weeks sir, what shall we do?"
6995514 offer waffles to the waffle God and hope they revive Him
6995531
But we don't have enough waffles give to the Waffle God. The Waffle Gods price is too high.
6995648
The waffle gods can't help us but I believe the Role playing gods could might help us.....for a price
7110608
The Role Playing Gods? Never heard of them. They must be putting up an act.
7111944
That's because they don't appear to others unless you summon them and interest them.......but I don't remember how to summon them......crap.
Hi
Bye
(reads last part)
...
(looks at chapter title)
...Ooohh, now I get it.