(Wreck-It Ralph/MLP:FiM crossover) A My Little Pony video game is put into the Litwak Arcade, and the characters from the show live their lives as game sprites in a digital world. However, circumstances get serious as Twilight is kidnapped by a desperate NPC from a game doomed to be unplugged. With help from Wreck-It Ralph and Fix-It Felix, they must rescue her before the arcade opens.
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Yes! Someone finally did it! I've been looking for a crossover like this for ages! I'm very excited that you wrote it, and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up!
I love this. I love this a lot. I like the idea, you're style of writing, SeaBottom, all of it. You just have a few typos here and there. That's all I can really bitch about. I guess the paragraphs could have been spaced better too?
Regardless. I really love this.
Interesting so far. Loved the movie. Will follow and see where this is going.
Not too many critical typos, though I did catch this one:
I'm going to assume you meant can't.
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Thank you for telling me. To be honest, I was actually in a bit of a rush to post this chapter. That and I had spent too much time in front of my computer and my eyes were getting tired.
This is quite the amazing story.
But by any chance, is Sargeant Calhoun gonna be in this too?
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But, I've toyed with the idea of making other MLP/Wreck-It Ralph crossovers, so if that ever happens, you might seen Calhoun then. 
The story already has too many characters as it is, so no, Calhoun won't be making an appearance.
Nice! I love it!
More please! This is epic!
...Oh gods. They should have just left Trojan...
He brought it baaack...
HE BROUGHT IT BAAAAACK!
AAUUUGGHHHH!
5217203 They've returned, activate defence protocol N *slaps the big, red, button*
Nuke it from spacccccce!
*bomb falls and destroys everything*
Shoo-bee-doo
Noooooo!
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The breezies were only the beginning.
5217691 am i the only one who doesnt no what the hell is going on
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The ending was meant to be an homage to the seaponies from G1 MLP.
I think I saw this on fanFiction...it is really good.
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Oh yes, I keep my MLP fanfics on both this account and on my FF.net account.
Well, no wonder he is a Troyan horse.
This is interesting.
Well, seems Game Pinkie is less powerful that cartoon PInkie, or she would be able to teleport too.
Uh Oh...
Nice story if a tad short.
KILL IT WITH FIRE
-I beleive you might want "malted" instead of "molten".
A horizontal line (there is a button on the edit interface for that, perhaps next to the one for numbered lists), or just a blank line would be good to mark this scene transition.
It looks like this:
- Consider "tap" instead of "wave". He hits things with it, he doesn't ever use it like a magic wand I don't think?
-You have a '0' where you want a ')'.
-As before, I recommend replacing "wave" with something more 'hammer-like'.