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Dayum that was fast! Can't wait to read it.
...Damn. I guess Toby was...NAUGHTY.
And I guess it's goodbye for real this time?
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One more Alternate chappy...and then yes, that should be all.
Didn't expect her to go that far. You're on a roll man.
Celly's really gone off the deep end.
That... was really dark... Takes obsessive to a whole new meaning.
....Ow. I actually felt what Tobias felt in the end.
Well damn! That was...not what I was expecting lol!
I was expecting her to drag him back kicking and screaming, gosh that was, it was good but damn!
Yandere Chan :3
That was more funny to me than scary. . . I think I might have a problem
Did, she just kill him Damn, how is she going to explain this to everybody else?
I kinda interested in continue of this chapter. It's looks promising: reaction of others and stuff. I almost hear it:
Celly holding Toby body "It's ok dear. We... We're gonna be together."
Chrisalis from behind "If this world have any justise left, there is no Tobias in a place were YOU go."
(Sorry fo bad English and mistakes, just russian army solder)
...I'll admit, I was expecting him to commit suicide.
....... seriously. Have one where Celly gets her ass kicked and exposed. Three alternate endings isn't that bad.
He did pretty good for a mortal.
I love a good story that has a princess go full yandere. We'll done. I hope someday you can write others with the other princesses.
Gave me the chills thank you zam!!
Wow......makes me wonder how Celestia will react if she ever snapped out of the delusion she's in, realising that she's murded her lover? That won't be pretty.
Nope nope nope celly would NEVER kill Tobias it was so good until that point
I'm pleased with your temporary return to us. Yandere isn't my fetish, but your expert details still manage to turn me on.
I know you're not planning on it in the near future, but... I hope you'll come back to us some day. I, too, have seen my interest in MLP turn dry over the years even though I still track various fics and greentexts. I understand. Perhaps in a few years your interest will return to MLP. I know mine will.
This shit reminds me of Coraline.
I hope you were going for that feel, because that's one of the best things I've watched.
well last chapter eh? goodbye!!!
here have a song from an old movie
Can't keep a good yandere writer down.
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All that time to prepare and the best he can do is magical locks, no weapons? Screw that. He should have at least a poisoned dagger (or Borgia ring) a Molotov cocktail, or at least a horn inhibitor, or all three.
If I had nine months to prepare, that house would be a fricken' alicorn death trap, with every last thing magical and non I could creatively think up. You tell me a human, given time, couldn't come up with a way to kill or disable miss sun-god? Hell man that's what humans do best, kill crap bigger and stronger than them.
7222864 DAMN STRAIGHT.
and so you see both sides of the writing of Zamairiac in one story. a good ending to a good writer, whose both capable of writing uplifting romances and horror-like mysteries.
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The house WAS a fortress, decked from head to toe with violent wards. Why do you think Celestia didn't just try to break through the clear glass window?
It's just a shame that he forgot to ward the chimney
Not that dark.
I've seen worse
but I like it nice work zamairac
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It's those shoddy unicorn contractors he hired to put up the wards, always cutting corners.
But with more thought I have to wonder what would have happened had he made a Pinkie promise to never let Celestia hurt him again.
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As we all know, Celestia and promises don't tend to go hand in hand in my stories.
Screw wrapping this story up this story is amazing please continue it or atleast a sequal sequal sequal sequal
7222040 she did posion him and you dont think she would kill him?
"Fool! He WANTS you to kill him!"
That was freaking amazing hahaha
Who really won here, I mean celestia never got his love back and Toby is free from any pain ever again
God what a bitch.
by LUNA'S MOON that is some shock horror danm dude that was pretty dark even for you good on you it takes a lot to shock horror me and i read both cupcakes and rainbow factory and rocket to insanity. i look forward to your next chapter.
Ooh! I know the proper way to answer this question!
"Ignore the fact that there was a much more well-adjusted mare in my life, because while you may have been a crazy bitch you fucked so good that I believed that I was on top of it?"
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Ur fuckin sick.
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Of course! After all, Celestia had only poisoned Tobias so that Tobias would have no other choice but to be with her!
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yes totally agree
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I bet she would brainwashed everypony
Bi*ch is crazy