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O.o; sam. You're a sick, twisted scary individual. ...I. freaking LOVE it. =p
F**king called it
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No... No...
Don't go there man... don't do it...
You know, at first I was rooting for him to hang on long enough to be able to slit his own throat....
....but to be honest, I dread to think what means she'd resort to 'keep him from leaving her' if he managed to succeed.
So many terrible possibilities.
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Too late
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I aim to please sweetheart
I feel as the sixth paragraph was made just for little oh me. Most of my lingering questions have been answered. Go on celly. Your sister has done the mind rape, now it's your turn.
Man, this is just so sick, twisted, manipulative, and very dark...
I love it.
Mind picking up that phone, because I fucking called it!
Anyway, let's pick apart what we've learned.
1- Celestia is about as manipulative as we've already guessed, this interlude just proves it.
2- Celestia believes, truly believes that she has complete control of what Tobias can do. Whether that concerns friends, livelihood, ect.
3- Celestia loves our poor human to the point where she has no problem manipulating his mind in order to get the result she wants. Even though she names it as a second choice, she's still quite willing to do it.
4- Tobias's chances of escaping seem pretty much zero at this point. Though knowing how you like to throw out back breaking twists, I wouldn't be surprised if you came up with something to save him.
5- Even if he did escape somehow, I have no doubts that Celestia would have a way to find him again.
Conclusion - Celestia's nature really reflects the title of this story well. She has absolute power and she knows it. She knows she can dictate his life in the right-sorry I meant GUIDE it in the right direction.
Knowing all of what I know now, the tension is high as I try and fail to figure out a way for Tobias to escape. You've captured my interest since the start and have held it firmly ever since.
Keep it up my friend
5060188 Whelp...as creepy as that is implied...I want to read that scene!
Next chapter will definitively be a fun read.
I love how she realizes Toby was just angry and didn't mean the things he said but still thinks she needs to win him back... it really says a lot about her mentality even before the breakup if she thinks she NEEDS to do this...
Also, fuck off when it comes to lying to your sister Celly, she loves you and you don't really seem to reciprocate. Remember what happened last time?
Yo, big white's messed up.
why do i get the feeling this phrase will need to be invoked
oh i can't wait to see what happens next
my darling Toby sleep for two hours. you know I think I should be creeped out by that but I'm not.... I can see her perspective
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Wouldn't Luna pick up on his nightmares about Celestia?
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Not if she believes that using magic (hers) will give the poison back strength.
WOW!! Celestia, you need some therapy badly!
For some reason I feel that calling her "Obsestia" would be kind of fitting.
It's always nice to see what goes on in a yandere's head. For some reason she doesn't think/act like a yandere in her head. But I guess not all yandere's act and think the same.
I think this story would benefit greatly if it were to be written less like a love story and more like a genuine, dark, realistic horror story.
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Then by all means, go ahead
Once you're done then tell me, I'd love to read it.
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I actually came up with something in my dreams last night. I'll send you a link when I finish the first chapter.
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Sweet
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I'm just waiting for Celestia to get caught in her own webs of lies similar to this just stop at 4:49:
video link
I'm going to keep asking until you respond when are you doing twilights story.
I still don't get how you can call my Celestia unsympathetic when you portray her as this deranged yandere maniac. Mine at least thinks she's doing what's right, this one is just selfish and crazy.
Anyway, this is weirdly interesting to me, which is rather unusual for the pony/human genre. So... keep it coming, I guess.
5067780 Someone's gotta lay down the law, mate
I have only one thing to say to you Celestia "You are BUCKING crazy seek medical help now"
I like this story, please write more
5059972 You obviously didn't read the conversation Zamairiac and I had last chapter about the same subject.
Also, I'm not too sure but I feel that this is appropriate.
(about the 0:11 mark *lol mark*)
man.. this is like your other fics huh suddenly stopping
but i don't blame you blockades happened right?
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Check my latest blog for details
5095809 umm.. it's not just about 1 book. it's about the other fics that are not yet complete (the child in me, cadence saga etc..) and i'm not complaining or anything and you fics all reached the top 10 stories and all but.. can you update the other fics?
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Stories take time to write you know. And it's more about the inspiration to do so rather than just the effort.
I'm concentrating on this for now, others come later.
5095874 that's reassuring thanks
Well she's crazy.
You write crazy a little to well and I'm starting to worry maybe you should take a break from writing go on vacation get away from Celestia's broken psyche.
-Everyone on the site puts a gun to my head-
O_O
I say this of my own free will. You should ignore my previous advice and continue writing every moment of everyday. All hail the sun!
-Click-
Phew, backstapping pricks.
-Click-
O_o
-Bang-
Well i think everyone saw the tities coming.
Now i shall stick my head in a pillowcase and cry in a corner. God help us if this thing ever visits earth...
5150397 Since when were you ever playing Russian Roulette?
5150397 Ok, burn the corpse and then tell her majesty that her order has been followed.
you know after reading this chapter again many years later i realized that you birthed most of my fetishes xd