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Bestlestia!
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Details my friend, details!
kinky
YOU ARE DOING IT....... Im gonna get nightmares when it comes
5102468
I'm gunna get nightmares when it comes~!
DOUBLE POINTSSS if you get the reference(s)
So, just wondering, does this take place in an Au where Celestia prematurely bonded to Toby? I mean obviously it's an AU, for obvious reasons, but I just want to take note of all the little differences.
In the original Toby wasn't really mad per say when AJ tried to rope him, he found it funny where Celly found it angering; but here they both felt the anger because of their bond. So did she do it early in this one?
Anyway, screw you Zam, yadda yadda I hate you, all the things I've said 1000x before.
huzzah! the fun has been doubled...drink it!
Okay, I'm officially scared now.
this has been an eeriely good chapter I look forward to your next chapter. With that I say "Be strong Tobias. You can prevail against this evil Sun Princess. I am rooting for you!"
Eh...even if the poison were designed specifically damage or disable key functions and macro/fine motor manipulation, his body wouldn't degrade so fast. Old sunny butt here has another force at work here draining out his power and body's self repair capabilities. My question is; was this fact overlooked, or is the victim here just that dense? Besides, if all else fails, he does have sharp teeth. If he breaks a tooth off anywhere in or on her, the natural bacteria in human teeth would kill celestia. Granted, a slow and agonizing death, but lethal all the same. Revenge from the grave toby! Kill the bitch! =p
Did molly and trolliestia just become one?
#2spooky4me
Damn this dude cant catch a break but he's a stronger man than i am there's no way i woulda made it this far I'd of given up at hope of life at this point and tried to swallow my damn tongue
It's good that Tobias is fighting back, otherwise this story would have gotten boring. Three days left to go
Oh how i just love this
At this point I would just give in, I mean come on Celestia went out of her way to make a poison that was meant just for him, if I was stuck in his situation then I would just throw in the towel, no amount of pain and torture is worth trying to escape someone that controls a floating ball of exploding gases in outer space.
*reads last part* OH HELL NO!
Why do you write stories where Celestia is so... abhorrent? Why portray her as such an absolute monster?
5105039
I've written her nicely before you know
To be honest I don't know, I just taking ponies and making them completely fucked up sometimes
Wow, really makes me wonder how the mane six and Luna would react if they knew what Celestia have been doing these last Days.
5105431 I, once again, NEED AN ADULT.
Creepy, but well made, chapter. Keep going!
If he kills himself she's fucked XD
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5135068 NOT LOOKING FOR AN ALIEN ONE!
5105431
Zam there is fucked up and then three tiers above that is what you do to these ponies. Then again I fucking love it!
Keep it up you magnificent bastard!
Oh I went to K-Mart and got cups so everyone should be set.
Do I have to read the royal break up chronicles first or....cuz I'm seriously about to read this and don't want to miss some plot, and story line
As much as I like this story, I just can't shake the feeling that Tobais is written expressly to lose. He lacks the resolve to stick to his convictions, the presence of mind to remember that his week long agony is all on her and the awareness of the simple fact that he's dealing with a master manipulator so the only one he can trust is himself.
He should know that her talk about the bond is bull as it's a natural thing to happen between those that spend tons of time together. He should have had a similar bond with Luna and Chrysalis. He should know that magic should have little barring on that. For if it did, Luna and Chrysalis would be beating down Celly's door as their bodies would be alerting them to his danger.
He knows that he shouldn't trust a word she says yet continues to do so. I know that one doesn't just stop loving, caring, or trusting someone, but after poisoning him and expertly lying about it not 4 days ago he should be aware enough to keep his head in the game and not thrust a word she says. One look at what has become of his body should be enough to remind him how very willing she is to hurt him, despite her claims otherwise.
Honestly, I feel this is the biggest detriment to this story. We don't get a full view of how good Celly is at playing Toby like a harp because he makes it too easy for her. We could have been treated to a Celly so skilled that even we the readers would start to buy her lies, a psychological tale where you would never know all that Celestia had done until she let you. But as it stands it only leaves me wondering "how can this guy not see it or fight it proper".
Least he could have done was to consider giving himself the concussion that Celly denies him by trying to throw his head to the floor or something.
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Your feeling is misguided, I assure thee
The one thing that is bugging the hell out of me why has luna and chrysalis try to visit him. Also luna can visit dreams and pull up someone memories of the past.
5172352
I generally expected no less form you. I've enjoyed all your other stories, so I'm sure I'll like this one too.
I would kill my self at this point.
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Little early to do something that drastic, isn't it?
RIP in pieces, never again shall updaterino. Enjoyed while lasted Forever more 420 blaze it.
well yandere
5172509 true shit
5200210 dude where did you get your profile pic? it's awesome!
Then we wait for....
Wait, what comes after shit, because right now, shit has happened and gone by we are a new level of fucked here.
danm fine work man.
well written with a nicely crafter character set to boot.
i like this.
5150453 I have more than you. Yes, I am childish right now, deal with it.
Dude this story is so messed up.... But I can't stop reading it.
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And I would still like living with someone like that
At least i know her love would be genuine
This went to a very distinct and memorable place.