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Holy Shit. Nice job yet again.
You play with fire and you get burnt
You play with Celestia and you get your shit wrecked
I knew, that this was going to happen.
This chapter is definitely a treat. Also a reminder to never eat food or accept gifts from crazy pony princesses. The more you know.
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Shoulda moved to Griffonia, you idiot.
The only problem I see with the plan is Celestia claiming someone else poisoned him, I mean, someone will have to take the blame eventually probably... there's probably going to need to be a scapegoat sometime, right?
Who's she going to put into jail under the false pretenses? Probably an innocent pony. And chances are the law won't be lenient on said pony for attempted poisoning of a consort...
Unless Celestia uses it to make herself look even better by pardoning him/her
Man, Celestia can be scary.
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I got it..... *Picks up baseball bat* We'll go kill Celestia.
4998080 or hid in the dragon badlands
Oh, and I almost forgot, the chapter is named "The Law" so I am legally obligated to post the following:
4998160 Why would you want to break a bat?
4998237 It's the metal, diamond coated basball bat of Hephaestus. It's not going to break........
Wow...
She is just all sorts of manipulative. Though i suppose at her age and having been living with the Changeling Queen you'd pick up some tricks along the way.
This has the lust for love of Misery (Stephen King) and the quick witted woman from Catwoman (The Movie)
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let's go
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Be sure to use the bat Ace used to defeat a Dalek!
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I've seen this movie.
4998365 Ahhh....1980s Doctor Who.
Just lie to Celestia, that'll get her away from you. Tell her you're gay and love to touch dicks.
...and hope she doesn't turn herself into a stallion.
The fuck am I thinking?
4998254 or she is holding my entire race hostage! i.imgur.com/KVsWJ.png
4998089 my bits are on Trixie taking the blame
Wow...just wow.
This whole chapter is just so smooth! The way you wrote Celestia as well.
That paragraph right there. It doesn't just show Celestia, it shows YOUR Celestia. And the way she effortlessly had our poor protagonist fucked over from the start without me realizing it is simply the mark of a brilliant writer. Whenever you get bored of FIM, you could go far with your penmenship
Again, awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one
I knew Tobias shouldn't have eaten the food Celestia gave him. This Celestia makes me wish to follow nightmare moon to death and join her for her thousand year imprisonment on the moon just to avoid this Celestia. I look forward to your next chapter with trepidition
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I am loving the way that you're characterizing Celestia in this story. You haven't missed a beat since CBTM. Her manipulative nature and the way she explains her plans was so ingenious, and I'm excited to see where this goes. Looking forward to the next chapter!
ahhh much better! more to chew on here.
Nice chapter can't wait for the next
4997207 Deal with it
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Very elaborate, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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I did not see that coming! Well done.
That just brain fucked my mind
Whelp he's fucked
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5000027 Firstly, you're not in a position of power to dictate what people can comment.
Secondly, it's already an overused joke, so stop trying to be special an prevent others from using it.
Well looks like you are going in a different direction than the other story.(whether it was because I brought it to your attention or not is the question.) the fact the Tobias is in a no win situation makes me root for him to see if there is ANYTHING he can do to get back at her. But seeing how this story is going I don't think that will ever happen.
Neurotoxins... don't discriminate what muscles they paralyze. They simply shut down communication with the nervous system, inducing a state very similar to rigor mortis. This effect includes the muscles in the respiratory system, which is why they are among the most deadly toxins. Tobias should be suffocating to death, right now.
Bitches be crazy.
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The doctor's will say as much in the next chapter.
Though I'm fairly certain that Celestia can come up with some bullshit reason as to why he isn't
5000123 Well then. I guess Sunshine dun' goofed.